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Stanza vs Lay-Text
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-06-05 at 11:27 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 01:06 AM.
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Testing Tha Monsta? Nah Fool When It Comes Ta Lyrics My Text Might Hurt
Ya Step On Stage To My Flow & Get Ya Dome Rocced Like Led Zepplin In Concert The Only Time You ever Lay Text is When You Placed Your bible Down You dope?.....Looking At His Verse Will Even Make His IP code Frown We couldnt Find Your Flow Even If We were Playing Marco Polo Bcuz You Lost The Battle.....Even When The King Went Solo You Say You Are *Rated R* But all You shit seems so Preschool You *Restricted* to win Like The projects having a swimming pool Youve changed Your Name Three Times And Still Yo text has no Elevation Cuz When Yo Words are Read it Sends Readers To Sleep Like Church Congregations
*merked* LOL Goodluck :thumbup: for those of you who didnt know he has hade a Name change 3 times from Restrited to Rated R to Lay-Text so You should get the verse basically i filled most of it with Personals LOL BUt Explantions Needed?..>pm me |
Lay-Text has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-05 03:37 PM.
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For A MomenT I Thought You was Gonna Duck me Man .....But I Knew you was better than That
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LoL Nah..I Got This, Been Recording This New Song So I Haven't Even Writen Anything Yet..
I'll Be Sure To Leave A Verse Today. ~R~ |
Aii Mayne Do That .....................................
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Look Kid..You Winning This Battle Is Way Too Difficult To Picture.. Like Trying To Develope Flim With Sunlight Exposed To The Mixture.. Seriously This Cats Wack...The Only Time You'll See A Nice Stanza.. Is When Restricted Writes Back...With A Diss In A Poetical Answer.. Fuck..This Pussy Is Straight Up Fake..Just Like Hentai Animations.. and He Couldn't Free-Flow On Me Period.. Even If He Let Waterfalls Fall On Me By Using LeftEyes Ovulations.. I'll Break Stanza Easily...As If I Bashed Him On Frail Health.. and You Would Think He Wrote In Brial Stealth.. Especially Since Nobodys Feeling His Shit Except For Himself.. Do Not Vote Unless You Get The Metaphors and Punches ~R~ |
Voted For: Lay-Text
Look Kid..You Winning This Battle Is Way Too Difficult To Picture.. Like Trying To Develope Flim With Sunlight Exposed To The Mixture.. ^^nice opener,connected....... Seriously This Cats Wack...The Only Time You'll See A Nice Stanza.. Is When Restricted Writes Back...With A Diss In A Poetical Answer.. ^^ohh damn, nice personal Fuck..This Pussy Is Straight Up Fake..Just Like Hentai Animations.. and He Couldn't Free-Flow On Me Period.. Even If He Let Waterfalls Fall On Me By Using LeftEyes Ovulations.. ^^stretched but nice n complex I'll Break Stanza Easily...As If I Bashed Him On Frail Health.. and You Would Think He Wrote In Brial Stealth.. Especially Since Nobodys Feeling His Shit Except For Himself.. ^^got it but, feeling himself is kinda played . hell you had 2 dope punches n the rest were ok, but this was a solid diss, n you stayed consistent after you dropped dopeness in ya 1st n 2nd bars..nice drop .. . . . . .. Testing Tha Monsta? Nah Fool When It Comes Ta Lyrics My Text Might Hurt Ya Step On Stage To My Flow & Get Ya Dome Rocced Like Led Zepplin In Concert ^^self glorifing opener, bad start The Only Time You ever Lay Text is When You Placed Your bible Down You dope?.....Looking At His Verse Will Even Make His IP code Frown ^^wack We couldnt Find Your Flow Even If We were Playing Marco Polo Bcuz You Lost The Battle.....Even When The King Went Solo ^^wack You Say You Are *Rated R* But all You shit seems so Preschool You *Restricted* to win Like The projects having a swimming pool ^^makes no sense...really it doesnt Youve changed Your Name Three Times And Still Yo text has no Elevation Cuz When Yo Words are Read it Sends Readers To Sleep Like Church Congregations ^^forced ryhme but decent. . you didnt have a good verse here...no real hard hitting punches, weak statements, blah at your verse.. elevate...... |
Uppin This Muphucka.. ~R~ |
Voted For: Lay-Text
Meh dont need to vote becasue stanza is banned for biting and if that happens the people he was battling automatically get a win:thumbup: fucker |
Uppin This Muphucking Battle. ~R~ |
Voted For: Lay-Text
V/R...this was actually a good battle both came wit good verse's....but ima have to say r came wit some creative punchs that were consistent an none played good meta's an wordplay......Stanza u came wit some good shit to u came at him wit some good lines an personals...but u came wit some played lines....like the project simmin heard it mad times....No Hate Jus work on that.......V/R-Rated.....RETURN THE FAVOR Or i'll get this vote removed..... Opener=R CLoser=S Punchs=R Structure=Tie Meta's=R Wordplay=Tie Vocab=Tie multi's=None really personals=Tie Overall=R-Rated http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194262 |
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