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Wicked One vs Stanza
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-06-05 at 11:28 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 09:58 PM.
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..::Lets Go::..
Yo I Hit You with 28 Punchez 14 Times so You feel 48 effects Im Makin You Feel This In The Inside Like My name Was Sex I Thought You Said You Was Leaving so Why Is You Back Bitch I Guess Lickin all Them Asses Made you Talk A Whole Lot of shit My Bad Did I Hurt Your Feelings I meant to Say Lickin up to Dicks Washing Chicken Wit Yo tongue is the only Time U ever Kissed A Chick The Bars are comin Down to a End Like Twix Sitting In The Sun I Bet If Someone Pulled out a Hotdog Wicked Would Open His Buns Define you?....Whenever In Conflict You Always Get Kicked In Your Ass Always On a Niggas Dick So Thats How He gets His Ease Ghetto Pass Aii Ima Only Explain The First Bar Bcuz Thats all That Needs to be explained if you dont get the rest your a dumbass and deserve to Live LOL 1st Bar - His Battle Records< LOL |
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-05 02:21 PM.
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For A MomenT I Thought You was Gonna Duck me Man .....But I Knew you was better than That
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No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch...
And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics... Lace you just for kicks or much less... Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect... Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though... Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals... Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers... You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers... Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain... I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains... |
Voted For: Stanza
Yo I Hit You with 28 Punchez 14 Times so You feel 48 effects Im Makin You Feel This In The Inside Like My name Was Sex 5...kinda weak...the punch was nuthin to do with the setup, it seemd filler, and usin his record that way wasn't all that good, you shud've used it some other way. I Thought You Said You Was Leaving so Why Is You Back Bitch I Guess Lickin all Them Asses Made you Talk A Whole Lot of shit 5...kinda funny. the punch was relevant to the setup but it was around a played concept. My Bad Did I Hurt Your Feelings I meant to Say Lickin up to Dicks Washing Chicken Wit Yo tongue is the only Time U ever Kissed A Chick 6...better, concept again is kinda played although not as much, bar was kinda basic and cud be worded better. The Bars are comin Down to a End Like Twix Sitting In The Sun I Bet If Someone Pulled out a Hotdog Wicked Would Open His Buns 7...werd!! LoL!!! this bar was funny...hot dog lines have been done before but not like this, funny ass bar!! Define you?....Whenever In Conflict You Always Get Kicked In Your Ass Always On a Niggas Dick So Thats How He gets His Ease Ghetto Pass 6...aight closer, you spelt his name out but it really had no effect with the punch, still good though. OVERALL: 29/50 No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch... And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics... 5...weak opener, a nice multi in the opening line but the whole punch lacked any kind of real power. Lace you just for kicks or much less... Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect... 4...GAY!!! hasn't anyone told you biggie and pac lines are played, and usin them both in one line is ultra played!! Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though... Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals... 5...ok bit of wordplay in the second line, field goals concept was aight but not used that well. Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers... You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers... 6...decent bar, a little multi, a nice setup with the punch although cud've been better, basic wordplay to but still nice. Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain... I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains... 6...again, decent wordplay, the rhymin was kinda basic....setup was relevant to the punch, overall an average closer!! OVERALL: 26/50 average battle..... both had some played concepts stanza was more consistent with his punches....tried seplling the name for a punch but didnt pull it off, also the play on his record was weak.......one funny ass new approach to a used concept so that was ok......wicked one came too basic, threw in some multies, but lacked in punches and thats what wins battles....... V/ - Stanza RTF!!! dizzee rascal battle - links in my sig!!! |
Voted For: Stanza
good punchlines and rhymes by stanza wicked one had sum tight shit too but not many good rhymes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Stanza
Jus Checkin This 4 myself .....................My Other account got banned SO LOL ..
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Voted For: Stanza
Ima give my vote to stanza. Although this was kinda close battle. Wicked One Wordplay was ok Structure was kinda outta order. Lines were a bit stretched out Punches were decent Stanza Wordplay was real good. Opener was good also He won this battle because his punches were more harder-pause- Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Wicked One
Nice Famz!N Nice @ Stanza but Check'n Pollz Cuz WICKED in ma crew!
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Still Uppin up in This Mofo .......................................
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This was feedback posted for Wicked One
checking da pollz & bumping da battle 4 krrrrreeew
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