Rhinos and Giraffes
 

Decend into dreams or so it seems the abyss neglects to gleem
Just beem defiance of the alliance of despair or so it seems.....
Comatozed mind yet it roams free to be what i want to be
To see what i neglect to see but never bring it all back to me
Visualizations of pre-historication dont know what to say son
Just amazement as reality and my mind undergo debation
un-provoked ontop of snow slopes where even the poor cope
A place to unwind my hopes but no need to follow any ropes
Where dinosaurs elope no extinction is relevant
Stegasaurus are mixin with the single celled element
For laughs smoking blunts with rhinos and giraffes
A multi specie mass colliding and crash different paths
But animals dissapear steer my mind to expand never land
In a sea of intelligence with neglecence yet the clever stand
Fam i condole this new world yet i feel all ideas are stole
Parole as i expand fru the spaces slip into a black hole
Try and hold his immortal ether of the pre-historical clever
But understand heaven but standing under heaven forever

Yo good drop man.....i liked the way u rhymed thigs....work on imagery....decent structure......nice word play....peace....holla at me at my new OM....Intermental - End of my life

Thanks for the feed apprecitaed even though i fort i had some abstract imagery in there
Ill hit ur piece up soon

You had some imagery....but u sick...u can do much betta brotthaa