JyMiNy vs All_Good
 

Battle Rules:

5 bars Exact (1 bar = 2 lines)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-07-05 at 12:49 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

All_Good has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 12:53 PM.

Your name is Pyro but you spit weak shit, no fire/
Compared to me, Im a flamethrower while your a weak ass lighter/
Motherfucker, get prepared for a lyrical slaughter/
Your fire? Bitch ima bout to put yo ass out cuz im water/
Pull out the 9, and ya say "Please dont hurt me"/
I aint "G-Unit", but im havin yo ass "Beggin fo Mercy"/
You aint suckin dick, but im havin you on your knees sayin please/
I spit in yo face and say "Shut the FUCK up" and give that trigger a squeeze/
When i was a little kid they told me not to play with fire cuz i might get hurt/
Now i know this a lie cuz this kid gon get murked/

* We had this battle on a different board and nver got finished. His username was "LyL Pyro" so it should make sense and shit now.

JyMiNy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 01:00 PM.

Yea dey call me PyRo tht because I spit FIRE/
Sayin that Pyro's spit wont hurt? bitch you's the lier//

After I drop you up in flames like u was a wicth/
Claimin your G-Unit but it dont stand for GAY UNIT!//

Bitch settle down, dont make promises you cant keep/
I can tell your scared, Like a virgin at a nude-beach//

You crazy if yu really think people belive you gotta glock/
When ya stuck ya dick in a barrel thats the closest you got to gettin a gun cocked//

I got one more bar, and then this shits gonna be done/
AllGood battlin me was a mistake like ya mom's son//

Not the best but o well.... uppin

Voted For: All_Good

ok this battle was all weak no punches alot of self glory thi is a battle man but everythin was weak cant really tell who won on this 1 the only thing that i can see is rhymin and all good won it so my vote goes to all good

This was feedback posted for JyMiNy
 

I ain't even gonna front. This was a weak battle for real. Like a couple blind cats in a fist fight: throwing bare punches but hardly ever hittin each other.
Vocab was basic overall with no use of lingual devices (such as metaphors,similes etc.)
At first the all that business bout pyro didnt make sense to me but then i checked and it started making sense.

Anyway i wasn't really feelin All_Good's verse. Flow wasn't nothing special and he tried to squeeze in too many syllables in some of the lines, which made his structure just seem off. His punches were weak,like the line:

"Motherfucker, get prepared for a lyrical slaughter/
Your fire? Bitch ima bout to put yo ass out cuz im water/"

That hit was ineffective and seemed played and amatuerish and i feel he could have done a whole lot better than that.
Also i thought the line about giving the trigger a squeeze was out of context, which made the verse even weaker. If you ain't built up to talkin bout guns, dropping it out of nowhere doesn't have no punch to it.
His opener AND closer were equally poor.
Basically, All_Good needs to seriously elevate.

Now Jyminy had a more clear and organised structure to his verse which made for a more interesting verse. Flow was easier to follow than All_Good's. These two factors made me feel Jiminy's verse more. The line about Gay Unit was probably the weakest line in his verse.
His line:

"You crazy if yu really think people belive you gotta glock/
When ya stuck ya dick in a barrel thats the closest you got to gettin a gun cocked//"

Was probably my favourite line in the entire battle, even though he could have structured it better by keepin the syllables in each line consistent, and could've made it a harder hitting punch.

Based on these things i have to give my vote to Jyminy

Yo can you lot RTF and vote on my battle

Shit i meant to click Post vote.my bad............................................... ..

Voted For: All_Good

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Voted For: All_Good

all_good- Good punches. you could work on your flow an wordplay...

fav line
Pull out the 9, and ya say "Please dont hurt me"/
I aint "G-Unit", but im havin yo ass "Beggin fo Mercy"/

7.5-10

J- You had ideas for punches, they just didnt land like they should have. You should have worded it differently. To you it might have sound good. Try looking at it from a pollers angle an then spit what you'd like to see written...

Rtf to my battle sig vs conflict