ric-b vs PreZidict
 

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6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-05-05 at 06:14 PM

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PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 05:53 PM.

ric-b has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 05:54 PM.

ur RHYMES,SOMETIMES those LINES,they gave us a sense of de ja VU//
u COMBINE the RHYMES of others and UNDERMINE them so much u think they spat by YOU//
but i see that demand in ur face screaming out for ATTENTION,u fuckin wigger like a white rabbit on ASCENSION//
like a magicians rabbit ENLARGED ill Pull u out ma left SLEEVE,left u 'DISCHARGED' like term'nal LEAVE//
the 'DISCHARGE' of the FUNCTION, CHARRED words hittin u like traffic in CON-JUNCTIONS//
canibus the DEFIANT shouldnt fuck with kas-tra-damus the GIANT,or feel the EMOTION of COMPUNCTION//
its like im the only INTERLECTED and therefore the PRESIDENT of the lyrical EMBASSY//
spit on u and ur RESIDENCY and bottle it till u INFECTED with LEPROSY//

This was feedback posted for ric-b
 

nice....multi's and nice punches they landed hard best line the 'DISCHARGE' of the FUNCTION, CHARRED words hittin u like traffic in CON-JUNCTIONS//
canibus the DEFIANT shouldnt fuck with kas-tra-damus the GIANT,or feel the EMOTION of COMPUNCTION//- u got em good there....for prezidict u had nice lines not to good....best line stupid u too light...in this competition u need weight...go get cha lines a tan
its known hes GAY...said "if ur happy n u know it"...ric clapped his hands!**-made me giggle......

ayo vote up on this shit.......trifecta dont vote on dis if u get 20 posts.......cuz ya shit is not explained well

uppin

nah i got my vote on lock down and ill make sure for a full explanation sorry bout other one......honest mayne

Voted For: PreZidict

Ok both competitors had an aight flow

prez- had the more personals and punches in my opinion his verse did alot of damage wit those lines but need to bring just a little more on ur delivery so work on that

ricb- u had the best in vocab use but really didnt see alot of punches no personals or anythin u need to work on that and not so much on ur vocabulary

v// prez cuz he had punches and personals
both did a good job and keep on practicin for elevation theres always room for more elevation to get perfect so keep doin ur thing both

Voted For: PreZidict

OK..neither of the two verses had anything that was all that amazing. Both had some a few average lines and concepts but nothing that really stood out overall anyway. Ric, you need to come more complex. You had all basic lines and no real hard hitting punches at all. Just work on your metaphors and creativity and you will elevate..it just takes time. Prez, I know you can do better from what I have seen. You took this though. You didnt come that great but with what you did have for punches, it was enough to win you the battle overall. this was probably the best line of the battle...

honestly, i dont think u can "stand a chance" like playin monopoly crippled***

Lol..this was a bit humorous.

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So Prezidict takes the battle for being slightly more complex.

Vote- Prezidict

both didnt have that great of punches......ric-b showed his intelligence and creativity a lil more.......prez..i thought u culda brought better heat than that i checked ur old battles....this was a downgrade....i think ric-b brought his a game so v/ric-b

trifecta........weirdo.......ayo mayne i know he didnt merk me...ya give him props, cool but upppppin for votesd

damn i thought my old battles was bullshit......everyone likes those betta tho, wow.......thanx for votin uppin

prezidict nice battle mayne......looks like u gon merk me......ill give u mad props

uupppppppppppppppppppppin vote up people come on mayne HOLLA ATCHA BOI!!!!