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Commen Sense feat Lac (positve vibes)
Tittle: Commen Sense (more on political shit) 1st- Lac 2nd- Key http://keyrogue.dmusic.com/ Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193856 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=193178&page=2 . |
typing as i listen.........
uh yea i heard this beat before, its mos def and someone else whos this kid? hes ok rhymes are forced, flow is ok minor slips here and there lyrics are average.....heres Key again with that laid back flow, a nice prescence on the beat flow is good, liking the lyrics, lol its seems to always be that the other guy makes the track blah....nice one tho.... |
lmao at yo laid back flow on this sound like you tryin to whisper in mah ear..:(...anyways lol good flow was feelin first guy to although sounded like he fell ina couple places lyrics was good liken tha beat overall good track..=1=
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*am dopified* |
thisis a dope track but to be honest.
LAC...you where mad doope and ripped it for a long ass time which was hella dope becuase you had the lyrical content and the emotion, it seems like you have a lisp tho..but your verse was hella dope..i mean hella dope....that columbus line was hella dope.....i dont wanna say flawless but it was real nice....just at some points it seemd as if you had alot of spit in your mouth KEy...you where not as good as LAC, he kinda over ran this track...if i haerd it i would think it was his track..you could have had a lil more emotion becuase the way you spit your verse didnt really go good with the song....a line here and there was streched....but your verse was decent...... beat was dope.. KEy, is LAC on RV becuase i wanna collab with him....he is pretty dope....if he aint on RV can you let him know for me |
He on Uf.......am able to give u his aim.
But yea it was his track, he asked me to finish it off..and i did..lol |
ohh then you did good..i thought it was your tracvk...lol
but let me get his aim............................ uppin this shit |
Lac - flow is good..delivery is ok....you had too much vocab some shit wasn't needed....your lyrics are ok, nothing creative in this but you made some good points....
Key - I didnt hear a verse from you just a hook... |
bahhhh, im comin in here to rtf, and u got this dmusic shyt up. lol get it on sc and get at me!
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^^have u even listened?..lol i got a little part since its his track..lol Quote:
^^Ghetto..lol ok ama upload it on sc |
hey guys thanks for the replies on the track this is my second audio so i got mad elevation to do but thanks for the tips though.1.
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