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GKillaz05 vs WillNova
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WillNova has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-05 08:50 AM.
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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-05 08:52 AM.
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Callin' yourself 'Lyrical Rapsody' you must be gay like 'queen'...
Have everyone readin' in a dream, couldnt wake us with caffeine... Overall battles 14, you beat 7 newbies and you lost to 7 vets... Callin' me out, get smoked like cigarettes, now havin' regrets... kid sweats like in the gym... will nova have lyrically fitness... Willnova's raps are borin' to listen to like a jehovah witness... This kid wouldnt be able to blast if he was shootin' to impress... I cant express your whack progress, Im goin' to win wit success... Ima hit this wannabe MC with punches that will loosen his tooth... Your personals are lies but if you say your losin its the truth... |
I've seen the realiest, ur neither G nor Killa//
dean or dealer, get ready fo a screamin thrilla// leave disfigured, after I done squeezed the trigga// bleed and quiver next to ya spleen and liver// leak a river, reap and dig ya, here comes ya maker// cremate and baked ya, no need fo an undertaker// in the scene of danger, ya bodies frozen stiff// talk 'bout stones and sticks, my words erode u b*tch// no bones to pick, worms chew ya dome and d*ck// wit this chrome clip, Nov spit explosive scripts// |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Callin' yourself 'Lyrical Rapsody' you must be gay like 'queen'... Have everyone readin' in a dream, couldnt wake us with caffeine... Str8 opener Overall battles 14, you beat 7 newbies and you lost to 7 vets... Callin' me out, get smoked like cigarettes, now havin' regrets... Decent bit played though kid sweats like in the gym... will nova have lyrically fitness... Willnova's raps are borin' to listen to like a jehovah witness... Ok This kid wouldnt be able to blast if he was shootin' to impress... I cant express your whack progress, Im goin' to win wit success... Filler Ima hit this wannabe MC with punches that will loosen his tooth... Your personals are lies but if you say your losin its the truth... Nice closer pretty tight VS I've seen the realiest, ur neither G nor Killa// dean or dealer, get ready fo a screamin thrilla// Ima rhyme it wivcha,,,,, filler leave disfigured, after I done squeezed the trigga// bleed and quiver next to ya spleen and liver// Filler again frow in metaphors or personals G leak a river, reap and dig ya, here comes ya maker// cremate and baked ya, no need fo an undertaker// Ok in the scene of danger, ya bodies frozen stiff// talk 'bout stones and sticks, my words erode u b*tch// Weak no bones to pick, worms chew ya dome and d*ck// wit this chrome clip, Nov spit explosive scripts// Ok closer Opener = Gkillaz Closer = Gkillaz Punches = Gkillaz Personals = Gkillaz ( only 1 weak 1 ) Flow = WillNova Complexity (mets n sims) = GKillaz Amusement = NA Overall = GKillaz Ok an ok battle, not the best though good flow from both though some ok punches were thrown but so was alot of filler Stay up and do you Please return the favour on my sig with similar voting 1 |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
this was pretty weak battle willnova no punches at all..no personals unless u consider that first line a personal..it still sucked..ur verse was an overall 5/10 GKillaz05 ur verse was a little better..ur opener was kinda creative but other than that no real hits..ur jehovah witness line was easily ur best line..nothing really spectacular but u did have more punches than willnova GKillaz05 wins this |
Voted For: GKillaz05
GOOD: Flow - Tie Structure - Tie Punchlines - Tie vocab - GKillaz Wordplay - GKillaz Nameplay - GKillaz BAD: forced Rhymes - none Forced Multis - none Non Sence - none CREATIVITY Theme Battle - none Creative Punches - GKillaz creative multi's - Gkillaz PERSONALS: Gkillaz hitted with hard hittin personals, Will didn't got many of em..... OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: Tie Closing:WillNove COMMENT: Very tight battle, hard to vote... good battle to both V/ GKillaz05 |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz Callin' yourself 'Lyrical Rapsody' you must be gay like 'queen'... Have everyone readin' in a dream, couldnt wake us with caffeine... nope...weak...3/10 Overall battles 14, you beat 7 newbies and you lost to 7 vets... Callin' me out, get smoked like cigarettes, now havin' regrets... no punch in the end...cigarrette concept was weak...2/10 kid sweats like in the gym... will nova have lyrically fitness... Willnova's raps are borin' to listen to like a jehovah witness... weak...2/10 This kid wouldnt be able to blast if he was shootin' to impress... I cant express your whack progress, Im goin' to win wit success... once again...no punch...2/10[/b] Ima hit this wannabe MC with punches that will loosen his tooth... Your personals are lies but if you say your losin its the truth... [i]ok...4/10 overall-15/50 willnova I've seen the realiest, ur neither G nor Killa// dean or dealer, get ready fo a screamin thrilla// no punch in there...0/10 leave disfigured, after I done squeezed the trigga// bleed and quiver next to ya spleen and liver// gore jokes are wack now...0/10 leak a river, reap and dig ya, here comes ya maker// cremate and baked ya, no need fo an undertaker// no punch dere really...1/10 in the scene of danger, ya bodies frozen stiff// talk 'bout stones and sticks, my words erode u b*tch// ok...why da censor...1/10... no bones to pick, worms chew ya dome and d*ck// wit this chrome clip, Nov spit explosive scripts// no punch dere...0/10 overall-2/50 both of yall step yo game up...and gkilla...i see you havent elevated...lol...this is men-iz...new name nigga...lol...no beef |
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