this is Americanize junk and characterize as funk even a wise punk can read this//nee
 

this is Americanize junk and characterize as funk even a wise punk can read this//need bliss love or an exertion of power that'll tower like Babel with shower I'm able to smell good in this swell hood// best use right guard

I think you need to work on structure, the vocab was nice, the lyrics were decent but the structure is just a little off

can you return the favor?
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