All In Her Eyes (first audio)
 

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2200675

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193442


All In Her Eyes

www.soundclick.com/atathac

thanks for showing love to the new guy.1.

Got to show some love to my boi this was yo 1st song...and 1st audio and u ripped it

but u sounded betta in the collab wit ya boi Key

haha yea i bet u are sayin that cause u are on it lol thanks though fam uppin.

i like tha beat.........nice delivery, flow, and emotion...........i must say it's an original concept, which makes it better than most shit on this site..........

8/10

pz

~1~

thanks a lot black appreciate the feed.1.uppin.

concept is dope flow was good for tha most part lyrics were tight chorus was good beat was good..overall it was a very good track quality needs a lil work but damn for ya first track...7/10.....

yo thanks D much appreciated on the feed.uppin.1.

i liked it, this was a nice track, I like your delivery and rhyme schemes in this, great drop for first audio, with some polishing tracks will be nasty, keep droppin. 1

yo thanks seven ye i'm just trying to get polished and elevate u know...so expect drops coming real soon.thanks for the feed uppin.1.

1st Verse - Aiight flow....story is straight...you had a creativite drive here......delviery is nice

Hook - Good

2nd - Good creativty you countinued the story nicely, it kept me interested

Nice drop.. I can tell you been to studios before

actualyl i never been to a studio in my life unless u count a studio being what i have in my living room lol but it's not close but yo T thanks for the feedback man much appreciated.1.uppin

this was a good ..... especially for ya first audio.....nice flow, beat was coo....nice track