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C.March 06-07-05 11:02 PM

White Powder vs Young Blaze
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines MAX
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

I know you said you'd set it up.. but seriously.. i've given you enough time.. just battle it out already..


2 days to check....
Hour to drop... even tho really it should take like 30 mins....
.........


200 Posts to vote

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-09-05 at 11:02 PM

Must drop verse in 65 minutes after check in.

C.March 06-08-05 10:41 PM

bumpity bump for mr. blaze lol .................................

System 06-08-05 11:09 PM

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 11:09 PM.

Ryan Hughes 06-09-05 12:06 AM

Ight Murda

I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'
He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul
Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat
I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text
Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...

System 06-09-05 04:18 PM

White Powder has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 04:18 PM.

C.March 06-09-05 04:19 PM

Good Luck.. ill drop in 30 - 40... word...........................................

C.March 06-09-05 04:50 PM

.....EXPLANATIONS FIRST.....
so you people get the verse

-Shits all personal… if you don’t get it.. plain and simple DON’T VOTE-

* Hasn’t really beaten a vet yet…
* Battled herbs for the most part…
* Said shit about my lines being long.. his were longer in the link.. Kirtie Allie was skinny and is fat.. hence stretched more then her waist
* 12 outta 18 battles were against people with losing records
* Title under his name.. no one voted him that
* real Young Blaze is signed to Macaroni Records
* He said he was afraid to be weedless.. just a diss on him not touchin shit..
* He lives in jersey.. Heat beat the New Jersey Nets 4 – 0 in playoffs…
* A Palindrome is a word or phrase with the exact same meaning forward and backwards..


The Verse Bitches :-)

White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*
Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*
Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*
Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*
Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*

good luck...

Dervla 06-09-05 04:55 PM

This was feedback posted for White Powder
 
:Shocked:...............HOLY FUCK.......................:shocked:

Sik Wit It 06-09-05 05:00 PM

This was feedback posted for White Powder
 
lmao @ WP battlin YB again..

..str8 gangstaness

C.March 06-09-05 05:15 PM

^^ haha word.. cuz u know.. im just straigh up g-fresh money like that hahahahah

C.March 06-09-05 11:01 PM

uppin... ... word lets get it poppinnnnnn with the votes.... .............

Implicit 06-09-05 11:38 PM

Voted For: Young Blaze

Good battle on both sides

Young Blaze - Starting off with the structure, it was kinda weird..not all of it flowed..u did have some good punches like the U-haul line..ur line about the toilet cleaner was a good personal..ur closer coulda been better but it was alright...8/10

BEST LINE:I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text


White Powder - ur structure was cool and everything flowed well but your personals werent too good..it seemed like the only thing u had on him was battling wack mc's..the jersey thing was an alright personal..ur closer was definitely not a good one..i would say only 2 of ur barz were actually good..6/10

BEST LINE:Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*




vote goes to Young Blaze

Restricted 06-10-05 01:40 AM

Voted For: Young Blaze



Aight Check It..

Young Blaze:

I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'
Nice Metaphor and Word Usuage..6/10
He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul
Nice Metaphor and Word Usuage Again..6/10
Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat
This Was Ok..5/10
I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text
Decent..6.5/10
Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...
This Was Ok Again..5/10

Overall: 28.5/50

White Powder:

White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*
Ok..4/10
Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*
Still On Same Subject? Old..4/10
Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*
Ugh..Not Hard Hitting..4/10
Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*
Not Even Relevant..3/10
Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*
Ok..5/10

Overall: 20/50

My Vote Goes To - Young Blaze For A More Creative Verse and Better Punches.

~R~

C.March 06-10-05 07:53 AM

wow.... considering almost all the lines in my battle were personals........ and you probably didnt get the palindrome line... god.... but w/e....

King Solo 06-10-05 09:32 AM

Voted For: White Powder

White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*
6...concept is getting a little played but still alright for a laugh, good opener.
Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*
7...personal again, nice concept with the kirstie allie shit, that was funny as hell.
Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*
5...ok, not feelin this, the second line sort of ruined it cuz it seemed too basic.
Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*
5...not feelin the self-glorifying in the second line, no one does that anymore.
Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*
6...decent closer, a new concept i aint seen before and you played wit it nicely.

OVERALL: 29/50



I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'
5...weak, forcin ya wordplay still, and also the 2nd line makes no sense, do you know the meaning of dyslexia - it means you can't read or write, nuthin to do with slappin backwards.
He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul
5...decent concpet in the 2nd line but borderline self-glorifying in the 1st line.
Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat
5...kinda funny, although you stretched it like fuck, also the first line concept is getting played now.
I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text
7...WERD!!! LMAO!!! 2nd line was funny, good playin on his name and shit.
Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...
4...WEAK!!! that car-rear shit is near enough the same shit that Daz has used before, you just changed the ending.

OVERALL: 26/50



ok, this was an ok battle....
i think white powder took it with more consistensy, he brought personals in nearly every line, his punches were funny, although a couple of weak ones with played concepts....decent wordplay, but basic in other places....
young....doesn't look like ya came with ya best here...still forcin that wordplay, ya need to stop doing that...also the use of the dyslexia line was confusing cuz to me it sounds like ya aint fully aware of the meaning so the concept was fucked....ya was consistently average in this battle, bar that closer which was weak as fuck.....

V/ - White Powder.


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