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E.C 06-09-05 11:01 AM

E.C vs Daubs
 
Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes
No d/r

g'luck fam...

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 06-09-05 at 11:31 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 06-09-05 11:15 AM

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 11:15 AM.

System 06-09-05 11:18 AM

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 11:18 AM.

E.C 06-09-05 11:22 AM

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****

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_explanations_

* his writing style had more dots that words hence bullet holes
** he used a polo mint concept in our last battle and oldham atheletic is the football team he supports for all u u.s heads
*** he is m-eazy's right hand man in his crew
**** he says rep u.k till death

ight just a lil summet for ya ass lol... g'luck fam :evilgrin: i dint come wit bad personals this time lol

Daubs 06-09-05 11:27 AM

Quick verse
Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*

Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**

Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..

I have to xplain for thick people!
* = All talk and no trousers = talks about doing big, important things, but doesn't take any action.
** = have spare time but don't know what to do with it.
*** = Axe to grind = and you want to get revenge or sort somethin out. (i beat him once.)
Last bar is easy...

Dont get punches or wordplay, pm me or dont vote!!

Daubs 06-09-05 11:28 AM

nice verse man, good look......

lets see what the voters say!

E.C 06-09-05 11:31 AM

werd good verse man... uppin for some votess.......

Dervla 06-09-05 11:41 AM

Voted For: E.C

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^^ I like this good pesonal with a punch.

Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^^ Alright alright good personal with a punch.

You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^^ HAHAHAHA nice personal with a punch once again.

How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^^ Meh could've been better, but it was an ok closer.\

Overall= E.C. nice verse you had lots of personals and good punches, they were good and i suggest the next time you battle put down some wordplays.





Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^^ Alright, this punch was played, seen it before but its word it differently but still not a good punch.


Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^^ Meh i felt this wasn't a good punch.


Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^^ Meh this wasn't a good punch either, and the explanation wasn't good, i first i thought you ment "Grind as in dicks", but blah still wasn't a good punch.

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^ I find this closer very weak.....Not a good punch.

Overall= DAUBS, what happen you falled off?. You had a ok verse here , but the gay punches are played,and the punches were just weak, i suggest you word it more differently.


Conclusion= IN my eyes i think E.C. won this, because he had a better punches w/ personals. Daubs i didnt vote for you because your punches were weak, it's not that i didnt get them, it just that it wasn't word correctly to make it a decent punch. and the 3'rd bar was played man stop with the gay jokes. The 1st bar was ok, but didnt feel that was a effective punch w/ a personal, sorry man my votes goes to E.C. for harder punches and personals.

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Daubs 06-09-05 11:44 AM

ok, but i dint have a gay punch, so obviousely you dont understand.


uppin.

¤ÐÅž¤ 06-09-05 12:25 PM

Voted For: E.C

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
^^this was an alright concept....personal
Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
^^wasnt feelin this much
You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
^^decent punch
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
^^imo,weak closer.......
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your vere was jumpy, 1 good bar,1 bad.ect
it was consistent but you had 2 good punches
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Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
^^ok, decent but basic
Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
^^eh, not hard hitting
Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
^^decent similie
Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is had and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^nah, it was like self glory for the punch..
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overall your vere was ok, but you need to be more
complex n try to use more original nameplays...
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not a bad battle,both relatively close

Daubs 06-09-05 12:39 PM

ight thanks for the feed......

if he KO's me, il never forget lmao!

E.C 06-09-05 01:05 PM

haha... uppin for more votes............................

E.C 06-09-05 04:05 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n

Ghost 06-09-05 04:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 
Nice Famz But Im Just Checkin Pollz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daubs 06-09-05 04:11 PM

yeh up................................................ ..


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