KhAoZ ThEoRy vs K-Trini
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-09-05 at 03:31 PM

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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 03:08 PM.

You certainly aint no Man, ur pussy, all u ever do iz Wyfe Beat*
Cook whack beef in a easy bake oven, so how u expectin 2 bring Heat?**
Take a seat, learn from the master, nope i wont-Blast-Ya
Elevation course is a 1 horse Race, wit me Flyin-Past-ya
U come up shorter than the Jockey, Racin without a Whip
Bitch ur nothin more than a Sodomized Teen..Cuz u juz been Ripped!


*=He made an open mic dissin 'Miss Pimptress'
**=He also made a few other whackd disses beefin wit Daubs, Torch & probably other pplz..

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 03:16 PM.

This ain't even a battle to me,cause ur one a my fans/
You couldn't smoke an emcee,with tobacco in his pants/

U like a pencil sharpener,cause you waste pencil lead/
Doc say ya need a new kidney,so ya break a childs leg/
*Kidney-kid's knee

Now look at wat you did,I' can't even hear myself speak/
Cause your rhymes so boring it's put my ears to sleep/

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

ight this was a pretty weak battle but this is how i see it...

khaoz:

You certainly aint no Man, ur pussy, all u ever do iz Wyfe Beat*
Cook whack beef in a easy bake oven, so how u expectin 2 bring Heat?**
^^ ok opener good personal wack punch 6/10
Take a seat, learn from the master, nope i wont-Blast-Ya
Elevation course is a 1 horse Race, wit me Flyin-Past-ya
^^ self glorification, kind of a punch 5.5/10
U come up shorter than the Jockey, Racin without a Whip
Bitch ur nothin more than a Sodomized Teen..Cuz u juz been Ripped!
^^ lol at the first line ok second line 6.5/10

18/30

ight man your verse was pretty weak but you did what u needed to do man.. and thats it really i no u can do better ive seen u do better so i aint gonna fret...

k-trini:

This ain't even a battle to me,cause ur one a my fans/
You couldn't smoke an emcee,with tobacco in his pants/
^^ wtf.. y wud sum 1 have tobacco in their pants lol 3/10
U like a pencil sharpener,cause you waste pencil lead/
Doc say ya need a new kidney,so ya break a childs leg/
ehh dont get it... 3/10
Now look at wat you did,I' can't even hear myself speak/
Cause your rhymes so boring it's put my ears to sleep/
nope not feelin it wack... 2/10

8/30

ay man u need to elevate alot flow and structure were good punches were blah u need to think of good concepts for your punches and u need to word them better soon as u do that you'll be on your way...

v/ khaoz for having a better verse in all aspects pz

thanx, voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

hahahaha funny shit fam...

an k, just what i expected, wakness!!!!!

LL gotsa KO, no reply needed.!!

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

betta puchlines, flow, and just about everything in this verse is sum good shit

k-trini you did a pretty basic battle n your punchlinez were like crap

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

thanx yall, upping 4 more voters in diz battle. leave links & favor will be returned 4 sho

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

This ain't even a battle to me,cause ur one a my fans/
You couldn't smoke an emcee,with tobacco in his pants/
3...weak, setup was gay and basic and the punch itself was played to fuck.
U like a pencil sharpener,cause you waste pencil lead/
Doc say ya need a new kidney,so ya break a childs leg/
*Kidney-kid's knee
4...first line, what the fuck is that s'posed to mean, 2nd line was ok i guess.
Now look at wat you did,I' can't even hear myself speak/
Cause your rhymes so boring it's put my ears to sleep/
3...damn!!! rhymes puttin people to sleep (HOW ORIGINAL) damn that is some of the most played shit i ever seen.

OVERALL: 10/30


You certainly aint no Man, ur pussy, all u ever do iz Wyfe Beat*
Cook whack beef in a easy bake oven, so how u expectin 2 bring Heat?**
5...not really feelin it, the wyfe beat concept dont really work unless miss pimptress is married to him, and the 2nd line was on a played concept.
Take a seat, learn from the master, nope i wont-Blast-Ya
Elevation course is a 1 horse Race, wit me Flyin-Past-ya
5...again, i get the concept and the wordplay is good, but you seem to be self-glorifying.
U come up shorter than the Jockey, Racin without a Whip
Bitch ur nothin more than a Sodomized Teen..Cuz u juz been Ripped!
7...DAMN!! LMFAO!!! that sodomized teen shit was funny as hell and original.

OVERALL: 17/30

not the best battle....
k-trini....ya still comin with no punches and basic played concepts, wordplay is not there, no creativity, just weak shit, either elevate ya game or dont battle....
khaoz, not the best i seen from ya....from what i can tell ya took it easy on this guy, ya got away with it but ya still shud always bring the heat just in case.....nice wordplay, lay off them played concepts and for future reference....don't self-glorify.

V/ - Khaoz


RTF!!! marvjay battle....links in the sig.

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Real easy decision...

KhAoZ ThEoRy:

You certainly aint no Man, ur pussy, all u ever do iz Wyfe Beat*
Cook whack beef in a easy bake oven, so how u expectin 2 bring Heat?**

Nice personal, decent punch 7/10

Take a seat, learn from the master, nope i wont-Blast-Ya
Elevation course is a 1 horse Race, wit me Flyin-Past-ya

Decent wordplay...6/10

U come up shorter than the Jockey, Racin without a Whip
Bitch ur nothin more than a Sodomized Teen..Cuz u juz been Ripped!

LOL 7/10

Overall: 20/30 (66%)

K-Trini:

This ain't even a battle to me,cause ur one a my fans/
You couldn't smoke an emcee,with tobacco in his pants/

Bad wording, good try tho...5/10

U like a pencil sharpener,cause you waste pencil lead/
Doc say ya need a new kidney,so ya break a childs leg/

I fail to see a diss...3/10

Now look at wat you did,I' can't even hear myself speak/
Cause your rhymes so boring it's put my ears to sleep/

Decent closer...5/10

Overall: 13/30 (43%)

KhAoZ ThEoRy had the better verse, so he gets my vote