My Mentality & Mind
My Mentality & Mind Concentratin on tha things that goes wrong in my brain Don’t have an ability to think cuz im high on Mary Jane Psychological warfares deceivin me… like a mind game Im minded out tryin to adjust but I still don’t see a change Shit when people fuck wit me I can’t do a thing Changin my moods fast shit man is mind altering No more thought patterns seen so much blood Too clogged up I need to get out I have to shove Cloud particles is what I see and what my liver mostly has Suffocating my brain is choking no grip in me need to grab I feel confined and restricted need some fresh air My mind cant do a thing is like it doesn’t really care So many demons and angels they don’t wanna share Eyes lookin into my vision my mind don’t want to stare Its mentally overwhelming it won’t respond no sending I want to receive it but my brain wont let me its mind bending It’s a philosophical question of whether who controls Is tha mind a part of tha body who dares to be bold My mind is inspiring no interest or thought im mind numbed Tha substance made be dull im unconscious im stunned Its like a virus inclined to do a particular thing im minded Fuckin with my senses it gets close to my eyes then im blinded Its intended to happen I set my mind to tha things that happen A hit wit an open hand………. then it turns to be a slappin I use little mental effort havin no apparent purpose Im mindless and I inhaled it……… on purpose Tha visual memory conjured imagination in tha minds eye Still my brain cant inhale its suffocating its about ready to die It’s a mind set in da dark determining my behavior and outlook Mind movin back and forward no direction man…… im shook A big gap in my brain due to things that happen im mined So much stuff nobody really knows what happens in my mind |
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upppin this lets get some feed
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..........bumpin this for feed...........cmonpplz
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This is ok, I like your rhymes,simple yet bring your drop out effectivly. Emotionally it could be alot stronger with more intense vocab.your flow slightly falls off due to a change in structure..
overall this peice is good,but could have alot more change to bring this peice to perfection. maybe bring some even mutlis thru,that way it will bring something complex to the table,while still focusing on the rawness a the drop! return the feed. link in sig. |
ok thnx for the feed thats good ill try to improve ill rtf 2morrow ok thnx for the advice
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cmon pplz lets get some more feedback aight yall
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uppin this let gets sum more feedback on this aight
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cmon peeps check this out and leave feed o it aight
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stopf drinkin nyquil yall sleepin man lets get feed
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uppin this...... cmon pplz leave feed on this aight cmon yall
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ok pplz stop countin sheeps and leave feeed ok thnx
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aight then i guess pplz is snorin hen cuz noone is leavin feed cmon uppin
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uppin this cmon pplz lets get some feed on this aight
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ok lets get sum feed aight pplz cmon stop sleepin
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