My Ghetto Prayer (part 2)
 

[verse 1]
Oh Lord, You are my God
always helping me with Your rod
always with me all the time
always helping me with every rhyme
Lord, I want You to stay just the way You are
so You can be with me and help me go far
Lord I know You’ll always be the same
You’ll be that way as long as You reign
and You will reign for eternity
that everyone will eventually see
Lord like a shepherd guide Your sheep
and help us with the fruit we reap
and just as the sheep say bah
everybody help me with this nah

[hook]
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah

[verse 2]
Lord as I walk in Your way
be with me and help me stay
in You, so I will not fail
to witness to all the lost so they won’t go to hell
Lord I know I won’t be able to reach them all
but You can save a handful from the fall
open their eyes to You
so they can see through
Satan’s evil ways and plans
so that they can come to Your land
Lord I know You can do cause You did it for me
and I’ll be with You for eternity
Lord like a shepherd guide Your sheep
and help us with the fruit we reap
and just as the sheep say bah
everybody help me with this nah

[hook]
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah

[verse 3]
I thank You Lord
for givin me this sword
and diein for every boy and girl
to save the entire world
Lord You are great
and I can’t wait
to see Your face
and all of Your grace
Lord I love You, You are the One that I love
always helping me from above
always givin me the right things to say
and Lord this nah we sing to You every day

[hook]
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah
Nah nah, nah na na nah, nah na nah nah nah na na nah......



the hook sounds better on audio....

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2205738

yea its aight but i think it shoulda been way better than that try to stretch out tha lines better next time or try to revise cuz i feel the concept man ans its nice and what u got is nice i just feel that u shuld stretch it out and take out the hook kinda messes it up too but still good ok man nice job keep doin ya thing