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R-Rated vs pictureperfect2
Rules: 10 Lines Max 5 Votes Wins No Crew No Hate No D/R House Rules ~R~ Minimum posts to vote: 600 Check in by: 06-10-05 at 12:48 PM Must drop verse in 240 minutes after check in. |
pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 12:40 PM.
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R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 12:42 PM.
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Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting 16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare ^^^ explain: that last line; metaphors compare things and in his sig he says ‘horizon of thoughts’ which is a metaphor… I personally liked that one so hope u get it. |
This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You.. Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too.. PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant.. Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents.. I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches.. Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches.. Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids.. Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits.. He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo.... Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??.. ~R~ |
Upping This Motherfucker ~R~ |
uppin... by the way wheres waldo books are mainly just pictures theres not really any lines in them.
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^Don't Say....and If You Read The Line Again...."Waldo" Wears A Striped Shirt That Horizontal...and Those Are Called "Lines" and He's Always Lost In A "Line" People.
Dont Sway Dog...That Line Is Dope.. Uppin This Piece. ~R~ |
Voted For: R-Rated
yo this shit hott as fuck...."This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You.. Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too.." damn u wiped the floor wit him and his name...had dope flow and good lyrics..especcially the metaphors..."Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents.. I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches.. Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches.." the first line on that was dope as fuck so were the rest but not as good as the first..had dope metaphors again...damn u dont stop do u??...."Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids.. Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits.. He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo.... Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??.."damn....that was just as good..damn u'd be a straight ghost writer...and a good maybe a good rapper havent heard ur shit yet...8.5/10...good..and the other one is kinda out of the picture...a little basic and crooked in punches but u can work at ur skills dawg....well u got my rating dawg Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin This Motherfucker ~R~ |
Voted For: R-Rated
This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You.. Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too.. ^not a bad concept, i aint mad @ dat yo PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant.. Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents.. ^nyce I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches.. Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches.. ^nyce first line second wuz really weak Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids.. Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits.. ^not bad, seen better frum u He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo.... Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??.. ^nyce metta Good verse, few weak concepts & punz but 4 da most part u came pretty raw wit da flow dawg Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake ^pretty played, but...i luvd it, really nyce bar this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time ^ok metta, nuthin special it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting 16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings ^really feelin dat, decent hit dawg, real nyce your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit ^not really feeling it, a lil basic you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare ^not bad, i aint mad @ dat pun yo Vote=R-Rated, juz had a lil more 2 offer in punchlinez, mettas went 2 Picture wordplay wuz pretty equal, but r'z punches really hit hard 4 da most part, both had inconsistant verses but R over shadowed pictureperfect wit da nyce punz |
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^^^ wow get off the kids dick... uppin... |
Upping This Motherfucker ~R~ |
I Dunno Why Your Trying To Delay Your Defeat By Deleting Votes LoL...You Lost Straight Up.
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