OpTmus-B vs !Infared!
 

Battle Rules:

quick 6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-10-05 at 02:08 PM

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OpTmus-B has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:41 PM.

!Infared! has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:44 PM.

ur losin this battle will make u angry, could say that u'll 'see red'
u aint on my wavelength,i got gamma rays that'll leave u braindead!
I'm U.V. as well but nt the colour, that stands for Ultra Violent!
Infra red!? nah ur more like a ray of light in a rainbow-Ultra Bent! :thumbup:
but ur nu n already ho showed so u probly dont no tht im talkin physics
now, hit me bak wit sumthin sik not wat i predict which is newbie genralistics

IP: 042E 9E4C

ur losin this battle will make u angry, could say that u'll 'see red'
u aint on my wavelength,i got gamma rays that'll leave u braindead!
I'm U.V. as well but nt the colour, that stands for Ultra Violent!
Infra red!? nah ur more like a ray of light in a rainbow-Ultra Bent!
but ur nu n already ho showed so u probly dont no tht im talkin physics
now, hit me bak wit sumthin sik not wat i predict which is newbie genralistics

He a bad critic when it come to heat he never clapping
Im connected to the game like joysticks, dat mean Im ever rapping
and I read ya wack shit, easy cause I low chase da ballets
and battle you in powerpoint just to showcase my talent
yo you cant face da challellenge, unlike me cause I show talent
and I dont mean cellphone when I say ya bars is lowstandared

This was feedback posted for OpTmus-B
 

checkin how many votes u have, he called u ''he'' how cute :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for OpTmus-B
 

weak battle.............cant decide who to vote for, so checkin polls

Voted For: OpTmus-B

He a bad critic when it come to heat he never clapping
Im connected to the game like joysticks, dat mean Im ever rapping
^^u neva rapping?wtf? u talkin bout?not a punchline
and I read ya wack shit, easy cause I low chase da ballets
and battle you in powerpoint just to showcase my talent
^^glorifing....not a punch
yo you cant face da challellenge, unlike me cause I show talent
and I dont mean cellphone when I say ya bars is lowstandared
^^seemed to be a punch wit glorifing again

ur losin this battle will make u angry, could say that u'll 'see red'
u aint on my wavelength,i got gamma rays that'll leave u braindead!
^^wak
I'm U.V. as well but nt the colour, that stands for Ultra Violent!
Infra red!? nah ur more like a ray of light in a rainbow-Ultra Bent!
^^not feelin it
but ur nu n already ho showed so u probly dont no tht im talkin physics
now, hit me bak wit sumthin sik not wat i predict which is newbie genralistics
^^nope

I go wit optimus on this one because he actually had a battle rap.Infared seemed to glorify and glorify and glorfify.

Vote-Optimus

Voted For: OpTmus-B

!Infared!

He a bad critic when it come to heat he never clapping
Im connected to the game like joysticks, dat mean Im ever rapping
^uhm, no punch whatsoever here, self-glorification in second line 3/10

and I read ya wack shit, easy cause I low chase da ballets
and battle you in powerpoint just to showcase my talent
^second line is aight wordplay I guess, first one's bleh 4/10

yo you cant face da challellenge, unlike me cause I show talent
and I dont mean cellphone when I say ya bars is lowstandared
^closer was the only real punch in ya verse, good shit 7/10

Total: 14/30 = 47%

~B~

ur losin this battle will make u angry, could say that u'll 'see red'
u aint on my wavelength,i got gamma rays that'll leave u braindead!
^good punch with personal touch in first line, second's bleh 7/10

I'm U.V. as well but nt the colour, that stands for Ultra Violent!
Infra red!? nah ur more like a ray of light in a rainbow-Ultra Bent!
^uhm decent wordings, could've been better though 6/10

but ur nu n already ho showed so u probly dont no tht im talkin physics
now, hit me bak wit sumthin sik not wat i predict which is newbie genralistics
^aight closer, good punch and ish 7/10

Total: 20/30 = 67%

Voted For: OpTmus-B

Structure-Both had iight structure, but i felt a more ongoing flow with ~B~ kept ya lines in tacked and everything ship-shape infared ur lines was kinda off...didnt get much flow off of it

Vocab-~B~ had great vocab in ya verse throughout ya whole verse made it enjoyable to read and made it appealing to ones eye....as for infared....ur vocab was basic and didnt stand out.....up on your vocab.....

Multis-Neither had any appealing multis in your verse.....wasnt really a key in this battle so.....cant really vote on this catergorie

Punches-No doubt ~B~ ya punches was all there, fresh ta def.....really something ive never seen before.....all went together nice....infared most your lines were played and didnt have an effect on your opponent you were more self. glor than actualy dissing your opponent...up on that

Personals-~B~ Had the noob disses that were fresh and intact made ya verse good..to read and they were noticable and hard hitting, keep it up...infared didnt feel u had any personals at all....weak verse man

Originality-~B~ had the only real fresh original disses/punches in this battle it was a sure merking......infared elevate in ya text battles try and actually diss your opponent...no hate though

v/~B~

rtf in my sig links.....1

wow thanks! lol i thot this battle was closed cuz its so old! lmao but yeah I'll RTF! :D

Voted For: OpTmus-B

~B~ took this easily, better wordplay and punches...original and witty...in comparison to the wack shit Infared dropped.

~B~ in all cats.

Voted For: OpTmus-B

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