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K-Trini 06-10-05 11:36 PM

K-Trini vs R-Rated
 
Battle Rules:

6 -8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 06-11-05 at 11:36 PM

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System 06-10-05 11:39 PM

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 11:39 PM.

K-Trini 06-10-05 11:40 PM

c'mon...accept now and post...to get this battle over wit quick

System 06-10-05 11:52 PM

R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 11:52 PM.

Restricted 06-10-05 11:53 PM

My Bad Man...Didn't Realize This Battle Was Up Till Now.

~R~

K-Trini 06-11-05 12:10 AM

Way ur bars always appear to be made by a bunch a apes/(monkeybars)
You could evade death and climb that shit right now and escape/

Based on ur pitiful skills,alone,only direction i'd go "U"/(U-turn)
Way ya text burn my eyes,they should call you shampoo/

Loathsomeness in ur eyes,justifies,why ya resort to suicide/
Repulsing bitches and hoes away,they should call you pesticide/

Only time you scare is when you dress like saddam at tha pram/
Only heat you ever brought to rap comes from your right palm/

Restricted 06-11-05 12:36 AM



Kid You Suck..You Couldn't Make Kids Sweat In A Scorcher....
And Your Verse Isn't Just Horrid...It's Complete Torture....
Every Single Battle Verse You Write..You Lose Respect Fast..
I Mean Shit...Even Canibus Is Pissed Your Repping His Ass...
How You Gonna Stand and Act Tall..When You Never Elevate....
And Your Verse Could Never Be Above Mine..
......................Even If You Made Your Words Levitate..
I'll Spit My Punches Directly In Your Ear...Just For You....
Hints A Clue..
Cause That Would Be The Only Time Some Sense Got Through....

~R~

tim dim 06-11-05 01:14 AM

Voted For: K-Trini

checkin polls.....................................

Vote removed

tim dim 06-11-05 01:16 AM

shit shit shit, sorry bout that I didnt mean to vote....................

Restricted 06-11-05 01:19 AM

LoL I Was Gonna Say..Whoever Voted For Him Needs To Leave The Site..ASAP.

I'll Report It To Strobe.

~R~

Implicit 06-11-05 01:56 AM

Voted For: R-Rated

ha ha ha ha

K-Trini - ur verse was wack..ur punches were definitely not creative..all i can do is laugh at ur verse..u had no punches..no personals..but it did flow so that was good.....3/10




R-Rated - i really do hope u were jus messin around..well u did have more and better punches than trini..it flowed..no personals but ur punches were good enough.....6/10




R-Rated wins

Chris Stylez 06-11-05 02:09 AM

Voted For: R-Rated

Opinion-This was a nice battle. R-Rated came hard as always. K-Trini even though idont like ya all that much i do see that your elevatin N gettin better keep it up.


Punches-This was pretty much a eve nright here just felt R-rated came better due to content.

Flow- I had an easier time reading thre R's flow while the 2nd bar threw me off abit

Personal's-R rated came nice with this in mixed em well with his punches which got him th ewin in my eyes.

Structure-K's structure was a lil better though but R's was still easy to read.So i guess if ya structure is a lil messy But u can read threw it wit ease its all good.

WInner: R-Rated for good hard punches mixed with personals


RTF on my battles when u see em.... Up's to both Emcess

Ghost 06-11-05 03:03 AM

Voted For: R-Rated

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Vote removed

Ghost 06-11-05 03:05 AM

Shyt HOMIE go get that removed my bad!LoL!no BS!!!

MyNamesGrafhYall 06-11-05 10:29 AM

Voted For: R-Rated

i really shuldnt even need 2 explain diz & i am not breaking it down bar 4 bar
so letz juz say dat;

R-Rated had a decent pun/personal in every bar, droppin fiyah wit diz verse lyke shittin after mexican tortilla u kno? ....decent wordplay throughout. consistantly droppin, da verse wuz juz better in every aspect ov text battling.

K-Trini;
yo verse wuz a lil boring, u had sum ok concepts but da wordplay within dem wuz weak & basic, few ok mettas, nuthin personal at all datz a big flaw in yo verse, u juz didnt have da complex scheme 2 ur flow lyke r-rated did

vote=r-rated, better verse....better flow, better punches, better personals, da word BETTER iz da only way 2 describe it.


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