Ghost vs .Barz of Steel.
 

Battle Rules:

8-14 UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DCK RIDIN VOTES
NO BITING EITHER
Straight Battle!Know What I Mean!Lil bit Of Everything (Ex:PUNCHES,METAZ,PERSONALZ,...)

Minimum posts to vote: [b]50

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 01:27 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 01:28 AM.

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz

yo BARZ homie my badi was gettin caught up n shyt!my COMP RUNNIN slow!but i was typin my verse n when i fckin CLICKED POST VERSE! it said -Thread-Closed-!n i CANT FCKIN BELIEVE I GOT A LOSS FOR SOME STUPID BULLSHYT!but i wanna beat ya Fair n Square!so spit the same verse you posted in the last battle!GOOD LUCK!,LOL

Hey its all good fam lets just do it again iight??

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 09:57 AM.

Good Verse Homie Well Ima Roll For A Lil Bit!N We Need Them Vote So UPPN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Word you to famz nice verse! Uppin this shit for some votes!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
6/10...Nice 2nd Line
Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
6.5/10...Good Shit Both Lines Were Straight
Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
5.5/10...Nothin 2 Serious Rite Here
Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
5/10...You Not Really Dissin Him Here Fam
Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz
7/10...Nice Close But Da 2nd Line Was Strected

Good Verse...At Some Parts You Wasnt Dissin Dude Tho, Dats Da Only Bad Thing About This


I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is
7/10...Nice Opener Good Meta
So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"
7/10...Anotha Good Line, Played On His Name
I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"
7.5/10...Lol Good Humor
So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"
8/10...Tight Open Line & Closin Line
All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"
6.5/10....Basic But Nice
This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"
9/10...Nice Close & Play On Dudes Name

You Had 4 Da Most Part....Wordplay, Punches, Metas, A Few Personals Like Da Closin Line

Punches: Tie
Personals: Bars
Creativity: Bars
Wordplay: Bars
Structure: Tie (Both Were Eh)
Multiplez: Ghost (None Really)
Nameplay: Bars (Hit Harder)

OVERALL: Bars Of Steel...Cuz Of Da Harder Punches & Nameplay

RTF...Any Battle Namean

LOl IIGHT THEN uppin!.....................................

Voted For: Ghost

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
gud wordplay

Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
playing off d name was gud

Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
dint like that bar

Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
not a gud diss kind of played 2 b honest

Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz
that wuz okay

your verse could of been bettr u had few dope lines but sum stuff was basic nd playd out yah mean


I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is
no

So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"
wakk

I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"
it dint rhyme

So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"
that was okay

All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"
it dint rhym again

This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"
okay?

weakk verse mane u had no personalz in d verse nd your punchlinez were very basic

my votes goes to ghost becase his verse had d more better personalz nd punchlines

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Voted For: Ghost

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Wait u can remove this i meant it as feedback sorry

Wow at TuNiT's Dickride ass vote...