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...Acuity - Translation...
Translation Tansforming ancient preachings into academic teachings Reaching intellectually into an abyss of the unknown Analysing emotions in times of catastrophic commotions Never quite capturing the full meaning in the language Simply going for simplicity, not understanding the full challenge Lessening what might have been to what we believe it is As human minds, cant tracvel back in time, to understand lines from behind Till time travel, the true theorisms,tasks, lay tame Infinite will hold the feeling written behind anno domini scripture Orchaestrating the mystery of biblical pictures Nevertheless, its because translation is nothing but what a translator interprets |
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WOW i was definitely feeling this piece.. this is one of my favorite poem structures.. and it just seems to hit soo hard.. soo much emotion put into one little piece.. good job
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This was good,liked the structure and they way you did the letters, i thought though, that this piece could have been longer, but it was a creative concept to write about and your vocab is good here.keep dropping.1
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thanks yo.........
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