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Adam 06-11-05 02:11 PM

Tweety vs Black Queen
 
Battle Rules:

The Establishment vs Livin' Legendz

Topical Battle
Topic: Stranded In The Middle Of The Ocean

15 - 30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 02:11 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 06-12-05 09:27 AM

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-05 09:27 AM.

System 06-13-05 11:37 PM

Tweety has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 11:37 PM.

Dervla 06-14-05 09:23 PM

Meh.........................Let me key my shit up.............


-Tweety.

Dervla 06-15-05 12:56 AM

Diary page 1.....

I can feel the blood dripping on my back with the pain similar to a bee
My body Shivers. My lips are chap, vibrating so quivery. Tears leak
Getting a head-ache, The images of the hits....The yelling vocals
I hear in my ear. Trying to understand why I ran. Still to me its a riddle
My feet hurts from pounding on the brown soil, that our hands made
My heart beating crazy like an over dose patient, while the sun blaze
above me. But my heart is deep cut by the puncture wounds
..Because I left the others behind thee, Hopefully i will see them soon
With the agony pain on my back as I lay back on the chair
I looked up in the ceiling, with a smile on my face
...............As i smell the ocean air


Diary page 6

My Fingers are prune, my expression showing confusion
Don’t know where I'm heading, but this is my fate that's been given
The taste of the salt water stays in my tongue, I'm so dehydrated
Feeling so weak, 4 days without food. *groans* my stomach is knitted
My lips are filled with "stains" vomit, it tasted awful when I swallow it
I'm desperately trying to stay alive, cause I even swallow my own spits
As I write in my diary, the darkness around me, is similar to my Life
The Opposite of light is creeping slowly making it's way above me, in the sky
I led out a "sigh", As I my head movements goes to left from right
Under my voice I led out a whimper sound, stars look upon me as I cry



Wind Rushing against me, I can feel the force from it taking me backwards
Rain pouring, coursing down my body. The Tough wind is more like a blizzard
Feeling so paranoid, Broke down on my knee's the pain in my ribs and my back
Arms around my waist, I can feel my bones. I scream hopefully someone can hear that
As the boat moves so uncontrollably, I feel so befuddled. "Please god. Help me"
In my mind, the saying "Every prayer has an hard obstacle" but I'm here dieing
My eyes starts to close, I'm feeling so woozy, then i felt my lungs....cutting out
Tears starts to run through my pupil as i heard my heart beating. it’s burning out
Put my knee's close to my chest and started breathing in "I'm going crazy"
Thinking if i suck the air out of gods creation then I'll live.....
....My theory was wrong As I'm lurking in the shadow of darkness phase



*News Reporter*

The Coast Guard found this boat in the middle of the ocean, with 1 dead guy in it, We believe he's from Cuba, Were still abuse and hatred are being committed. There was a Paper in his hand...that said "I just wanted freedom, why it got’s to be so far away?".


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