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as i think back [reminiscin]
this is an emotional peice so if you wanna hear gangsta shit, look away now....
love is foresaken, when is taken at first chance we all know at first glance, love is romance love is just pain concealed in lust when two hearts collide, what is formed is trust in time this trust, becomes jealousy when the bond is broken by a bottle a hennesy if love forsaken, what worth is the makin? is it worth all the pain the tears, constantly achin and breakin my heart, from the start to the end yes yes these words are for my girlfriend 05 bonnie and clide, ready to die for this girl whom i love down to ride always by my side, nd sex supplied she tryna get wit me, and she never denied two hearts beatin in sync, no need to think sweat drippin, from our bodies, sittin up on the sink its times like this when i reminisce and i wish, her kiss, was upon my lips distance apart, preventin it all baby girl i got you, all she needs to do is call make my phone ring, and i be down like whoa ill go down like whoa, slow or fast nitro she holds me down, so i dont float away head high in th clouds, as i rise everyday higher and higher, reality brings me down suddenly love, is replaced by a frown as my emotional anguish is crushed by this thought what if im not the only kid hittin tha spot and makin her hot, drip dop sweat drippin shorty why is she trippin, why is my grip slippin thought i had her locked down, out for the count she dont want me no more, she tryna break out dont matter tho, cuz i know love is fake what we had was real, but love is what we make whered did i go wrong, did i treat you bad? jus tryna spit this song, to reminisce what we had |
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uppin.. c'mon dont sleep on this, feedback please.
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uppin ..........
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uppin .. why dont ya jus give me some feedback..................................
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omg this is rediculous
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this was pretty hot, alot of emotion in here. props on sayin what u feel n not worryin about whether it was too soft or nothin. you need to make your verse a lil more complex tho, cuz it was kinda basic. i felt the emotion in there and you had some decent vocab, but up ya game a lil more and this would been real tight. I'll give it a 7.5/10. but holla at me about a collabo im tryna recruit niggas for some joints im about to drop.....1......
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iight no doubt no doubt, what kinda colabs? get at me via PM
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good shit good shit.......this is nice, i like to see emotional stuff once and a while.....this hit the spot.....kinda bassic.....not great....but good vocab...i bet this shit is to ur girl......goin soft hearted on me sick one?....lol j/p.........8/10
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iight iight thanks. feelin tha love, uppin for more feedbaCk
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still uppin this piece....
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uppin .............
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i liked this...no doubt...felt ya emotion on dis 1....
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