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~*Khatharsis*~ 06-11-05 07:42 PM

*s P A C E D O U T*
 
s p a c e d o u t ...


(temporary fixes)


t o think that time tongue twisted towards the temporary
e mitting emergence of feelings, felt once before
m inutes that seemed like seconds have glassed over
p erhaps, pushing forward the hours past, no more.
o nce, believer I, in happy endings, inventory taking, now at risk
r ifled, doused with warnings that were flammable
a rousing words of desperation, demurely mixed
r edundancy, word-life lies, reflecting ruse
y esterdays tomorrows are never todays

temporary fixes, not forthcoming
s p a c e d o u t, my words once r a i n b o w e d ...
hide in g r a y.

~*Khatharsis*~ 06-12-05 09:31 AM

uppin...........

~*Khatharsis*~ 06-13-05 08:26 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Cocaine 06-13-05 10:40 PM

wow this poem was fire.. i really liked how this was set up.. this was definitely ur best piece... good job on this man..

~*Khatharsis*~ 06-13-05 10:43 PM

thanks....man....


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