Weather the Storm ft.ChinCheck, Javid
 

yo peep this track!!...eney feedback would be much appreciated, Drop Links!!

this is some ish that Hibernation looped for me to spit a verse on...just woke up and recorded my verse, might be re-recorded sometime

www.soundclick.com/kaveh7
"Weather the Storm ft.ChinCheck, Javid

Order=
1st-ChinCheck .. 2nd-Me (no Adlibs yet) .. 3rd-Javid .. 4th-ChinCheck

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2526612&q=Lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2526612&q=Hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/down....cfm?ID=2526612
Lyrics (My Verse) - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyr...&songid=2526612

Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2210917
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2210934

uppin..........

still uppin....

beat is grimez... buddyZ flow is on point, lyricals are nice, delivery do fall off like real minor once an' a while, i like he ended the verse off too, fit well...

this sample hook is coo...

your verse... .

it fits in wit 1st verse, flow isn't as good you delivery fall off a lil more often... lyricAls are up to the same level for the most, i am feelin that verse,... good shit yo..

3rd - ain't feelin lyrical content on this as much.. flow is the best out all them tho still... i love the delivery this mans got, voice is nice too... mad multi's... i change my mind about lyrics, they was good, the 1st line jus threw it off...

4th- i think this the 1st guy... the delivery is a lil better from him on this verse... lyrics is bout the same, good voice too...


overall real decent track yo...

peep "How We Do It..." Ft: IllMental & SinfaC for me...

yeh thanks for the feed! i got the link now

oooo damn i'm feelin that beat.....Jedi Mind Tricks used that...damn i need to find out what beat that is..but damn first up was sick....flow was hot and thelyrics were tight...i liked that part......it was good shit.......second person up sick flow....nice lyrics....i was feeling that....my fav. part soo far u gotta unique and tight style...third person...flow was goood real sick lyrics...was feelin that good
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Flow:1rst:8/10,2nd:8.5/10,3rd:8/10
Production:10/10
Voices:1rst:8/10,2nd:8.2/10/3rd:8/10
Overall:9/10

this is a real tight song man...keep this shit coming...

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thanks for the feed! i got the link now