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Young Drama 06-12-05 11:10 PM

1st Felony(Wall Streets Diss)
 
Yea Homie Itz Here, I Neva Liked You Anyway

[Commas Mean Breathe Pause]

-I Handle Beef With The 50. Cal, Lay A Nigga Down-
-The Walls On My Street Iz Covered Wit Anamostity Now-*
-They Call Me The Truth For A Reason, I Leave 'Em Fucked-
-So Im'a Put A Huned Mil. On The Surgery Nip Tuck-
-I Blow The Brickz Off The Map, Show You How The West Do It-
-Incase A Stupid Nigga Like You Wanna Lose His Brain Fluid-*
-Triple Gangsta'z, Spill the Barz Ova The Beat-
-4 Barz To Kill A Bitch Nigga and I Aint Even Use The Heat-

*Wall Street iz Da Name, Anamosity is His Old Name
*I Blow The waawd Off Da Map, wat eva his User Title Says



Keep Tryin Lil Nigga

Young Drama 06-12-05 11:15 PM

Uppin Dis Shit Right Here


Dont Fuck Wit A G Homie

Ghost 06-12-05 11:20 PM

yo Homie Shyt Was Alright punches Were there Wordplay Was Koo Multis (umm) NOt That Good!but Nice Diss!Nice Perssonalz Also!RTF in my Diss also (WALLSTREET n TWISTED DIS)Link Below!Holla Back Atcha boy (Overall 8/10)

Young Drama 06-12-05 11:36 PM

Straight

Uppin Dis Shit

Mentor 06-13-05 12:14 AM

Straight Aim bitch

Mentor 06-13-05 12:14 AM

by the way...really dope shit right here.....NOT..BITCH

Young Drama 06-13-05 01:07 AM

Uppin Dis Shit...............................

Young Drama 06-13-05 03:36 AM

Uppin dis Shit.........................

Implicit 06-13-05 03:40 AM

this was cool....

...u had some cool punches but i woulda rather seen it a bit longer since its a diss.

......but overall 7/10

Young Drama 06-13-05 07:07 PM

Uppin dis Yall......................

Young Drama 06-13-05 07:57 PM

Uppin Dis Shit...................................

Young Drama 06-13-05 11:46 PM

Stop Sleep'n On My Shit...............................

Indeph 06-14-05 12:35 AM

I know u mad as hell.All that uppin and no peeps.
well I'm here to save the day nigga.Dum da da dum.

Aight I liked the flow in this.Rolled off my tounge when I read it.
Its weird,but the pause in the beggining made me come into it better.
Metas was like a "huh...wait...OOOOOO thats dope" shit so I like that.

Props on this.Bu make it hella longer,I wanna see all ether type shit here :)

pc...be nice and peep mines

Young Drama 06-14-05 01:16 AM

Yea Fo Real,Lmao

Uppin Some More

Cri$$tyle 06-14-05 12:20 PM

illness, goddamn youdangerous cuz that was short as fuck!

9/10

westside


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