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Maverick vs Stanza
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 Ko 4-1 Automatic win Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-13-05 at 01:45 AM Must drop verse in 61 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Maverick has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 12:48 AM.
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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 12:50 AM.
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Stanza...I'll 'Defocate On your Brain' To Give You Some 'Shit To Think~About'... Only Way You Get Twisted Is When Your Clothes Are Ringing~Out... Your Rhymes Aint Heavy Weight Dawg I'll Legally Box~Ya... I'm Burning Your Ass So Hard They Labelled me the Hot~Stuff... Watch~out This Is A 'Hot~Bout'...But Your Fire's Gettin 'Stomped~Out'... I'm Rising Coz I'm Smoking But You Hoping You Dont Get Knocked Out... Your Vocab Wouldn't Be Ill If I Soaked Your Brain~In~Puke... You Firing Blanks Dawg And I'm Aiming~Nukes... You Need To Get Training~Troops...If You Wanna Beat~Me... Or Your Gonna Have To Hire An Assassin To Do It Discreetly... |
Yo This Dude Is Bad Huh...Not A Win On his Record .........not Even In Graphics Sufficate Yo Lyrics Like Plastic its Real Drastic Then Dump Yo Body Like Ashes See when Spit Ima make you fade Away like the Pic Of Tupac & Big In Ya Sig If Wackness Came In Slides Then We All know Youd Have the Most Skids Dude Lets face Reality You Really dont Have any Rap or Hip Hop Talents They Call You Tipsy Bcuz when I Spit I Leave "ROB" "R"eally "O"ff "B"alance Its comin Down To an End So I guess I Can ease of The gas Pedal Of Skills If Dopeness Was a Car Then Your Escort Wouldnt make Evenit up The Hill Your Not In Area So Ima Bout To Bury Ya Like Gurls dat Wont Marry Ya Ima Tarry Up and Then Tear it Up Like You was tryin To Stear It up Quickie |
Oh I Got This Shit ...............Uppin Fo Me .......
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Voted For: Stanza
This Dude Is Bad Huh...Not A Win On his Record .........not Even In Graphics Sufficate Yo Lyrics Like Plastic its Real Drastic Then Dump Yo Body Like Ashes 6...not the best of punches, but you did throw a nice multi in there which made it good, punch cud be more hard hittin. See when Spit Ima make you fade Away like the Pic Of Tupac & Big In Ya Sig If Wackness Came In Slides Then We All know Youd Have the Most Skids 6...decent punch, the slide concept was clever and worded well, not really feelin the setup though. Dude Lets face Reality You Really dont Have any Rap or Hip Hop Talents They Call You Tipsy Bcuz when I Spit I Leave "ROB" "R"eally "O"ff "B"alance 7...better, decent bit of wordplay and a hard hitting punch. Its comin Down To an End So I guess I Can ease of The gas Pedal Of Skills If Dopeness Was a Car Then Your Escort Wouldnt make Evenit up The Hill 5...nah!! i get the car concept, it was kinda weak though and the setup was bleh!! Your Not In Area So Ima Bout To Bury Ya Like Gurls dat Wont Marry Ya Ima Tarry Up and Then Tear it Up Like You was tryin To Stear It up 5...again, seems kinda choppy and not that creative, seems like you just fell off at the end. OVERALL: 29/50 Stanza...I'll 'Defocate On your Brain' To Give You Some 'Shit To Think~About'... Only Way You Get Twisted Is When Your Clothes Are Ringing~Out... 6...decent opener, gud piece of wordplay and the first line i thought was dope. Your Rhymes Aint Heavy Weight Dawg I'll Legally Box~Ya... I'm Burning Your Ass So Hard They Labelled me the Hot~Stuff... 3...WACK!!! setup was ok, but then you self-glorified in the 2nd line so weak as hell!! Watch~out This Is A 'Hot~Bout'...But Your Fire's Gettin 'Stomped~Out'... I'm Rising Coz I'm Smoking But You Hoping You Dont Get Knocked Out... 5...not so much directly self-glorifying but its still there, nice wordplay though. Your Vocab Wouldn't Be Ill If I Soaked Your Brain~In~Puke... You Firing Blanks Dawg And I'm Aiming~Nukes... 4...WTF!!! ill/sick lines are so fuckin played, ya gotta come with more originality than that. You Need To Get Training~Troops...If You Wanna Beat~Me... Or Your Gonna Have To Hire An Assassin To Do It Discreetly... 5...weak, rhymin was not too basic, but then the punch itself was wack. OVERALL: 23/50 ok battle.... stanza started good, decent wordplay with some nice concepts for punches but fell off to the end maverick had a dope opener, then came wack the rest of the verse, self-glorifying and played concepts aint gonna win ya battles so next time dont do it....... V/ - Stanza RTF!!! daubs battle plz!! links in my sig!! |
Aii Man Ill RTF Rii Here Rii Now ...................
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
These both were boring verses. im not eevn guna finish reading em. ya'll need stronger disses to get your voters into the battle.
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STFU You Dont even have a win on your record but you have over 300 post LOL
wack ass STFU and we uppin |
Voted For: Stanza
Maverick: Stanza...I'll 'Defocate On your Brain' To Give You Some 'Shit To Think~About'... Only Way You Get Twisted Is When Your Clothes Are Ringing~Out... Not A Hard Hitting Punch..3/10 Your Rhymes Aint Heavy Weight Dawg I'll Legally Box~Ya... I'm Burning Your Ass So Hard They Labelled me the Hot~Stuff... Weak..2/10 Watch~out This Is A 'Hot~Bout'...But Your Fire's Gettin 'Stomped~Out'... I'm Rising Coz I'm Smoking But You Hoping You Dont Get Knocked Out... Weak..No Punch..2/10 Your Vocab Wouldn't Be Ill If I Soaked Your Brain~In~Puke... You Firing Blanks Dawg And I'm Aiming~Nukes... Blah..3/10 You Need To Get Training~Troops...If You Wanna Beat~Me... Or Your Gonna Have To Hire An Assassin To Do It Discreetly... Weak..3/10 Overall: 13/50...Please Elevate and Actually Write Punches. Stanza: This Dude Is Bad Huh...Not A Win On his Record .........not Even In Graphics Sufficate Yo Lyrics Like Plastic its Real Drastic Then Dump Yo Body Like Ashes Um..4/10 See when Spit Ima make you fade Away like the Pic Of Tupac & Big In Ya Sig If Wackness Came In Slides Then We All know Youd Have the Most Skids Haha Ok..6/10 Dude Lets face Reality You Really dont Have any Rap or Hip Hop Talents They Call You Tipsy Bcuz when I Spit I Leave "ROB" "R"eally "O"ff "B"alance Ok..5/10 Its comin Down To an End So I guess I Can ease of The gas Pedal Of Skills If Dopeness Was a Car Then Your Escort Wouldnt make Evenit up The Hill Weak..3/10 Your Not In Area So Ima Bout To Bury Ya Like Gurls dat Wont Marry Ya Ima Tarry Up and Then Tear it Up Like You was tryin To Stear It up Wack..2/10 Overall: 20/50..Elevate On Punches and Creativity. ~R~ |
Voted For: Stanza
[color=red][b] Flow -Maverick...Stanza your flow was off becuz it seems like u forced multies...Mavericks flow was decent and exceeded urs... Punches - though thrown off by forced multies...Stanza's punches were better...Mav your punches were set up well..but den ur punch either wasn't there or didnt hit...once u get that on point ur gwan be dope Personals -Stanza took this easy becuz he da only one with them...he used the sig too witch was smart... Multies - maverick merked in this category..his multies flowed and made sense..stanza..work on that and also DO NOT FORCE EM...all your multies seemed forced and that threw off ur flow and oft time made ur punches choppy Vocab -Mm..Maverick took this...stanza..better vocab than lass time which means ur elevating but u still gotta find da right spots to throw in those big words :thumbup: Originality - Tie Boff Wayz... Ahhh VERY CLOSE BATTLE!!!! both can use elevation...but Stanza had better punches..and when battles are close..that always decides...Hard decision but V/ Stanza |
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Aii Tahts It Mayne 3-0 Your Done for ...Nice battle anyways and oh yeah thanx for the money LOL
Peace |
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