LW Title - Spektikul vs. C.A.L.I
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Checking in.................
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check check check.......
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Throw spek through the air chop up his style as confetti to celebrate
Look at his avy..... his pen game gonna take a long while to elevate |
Aiight look, yo...
. . Battling for bronze? He's already a HW, check the size of his trousers . . . . Cali got a job working in a bar, now both him and his titties are the bouncers . . |
GL Cali...
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Im seein kats viewing this forum but not voting.
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Basically
an ok battle Cali - Nice play on his avatar nothing real special Spek - A more funny punchline again nothing special I dunno ima give this to spek since both were about the same creativity level and hit the same amount just the fact speks gave me a lil laugh was an added bonus vote - spek |
ight this was a good battle both dropped decent punches
C.A.L.I: you had decent play on his avatar, wordplay in the first bar was dope... overall nice punch... SPEK: lol this made me laugh... even if it is played... wordplay wasn't really that good... v/ cali he had better wordplay and a less played punch.. pz |
V/ CALI
Spek, "CALI Is Fat" punches are played as fuck |
Both of these punches could have been better..
C.A.L.I Throw spek through the air chop up his style as confetti to celebrate Look at his avy..... his pen game gonna take a long while to elevate ^ That was forced as fuck. The First line is streched, and ruins the flow. I have also seen the same concept used by you before against Spektikul.. Spektikul vs C.A.L.I Was never no hate i always thought youd shine in time But you aint never elevate even ya avys pen is behind in times http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181113 Spektikul . . Battling for bronze? He's already a HW, check the size of his trousers . . . . Cali got a job working in a bar, now both him and his titties are the bouncers . . ^ You could of worded this way better because the flow is off in the second line. Somewhat streched, but not that bad. The wordplay is half deecent, bouncing titties are pretty sweet :)...and the wordplay bout him being a HW, but it's a played C.A.L.I concept. Would be a great punch if it wasn't against C.A.L.I... But meh... My vote goes to Spektikul because I haven't seen his punch before, and I thought it was better anyways.. Vote: Spektikul |
Caliz concept 2 da punch wuz much more creative 4 real
Vote=C.A.L.I |
his punch was about being fat, but not really.....and it was creative because i've never seen a concept like that before.....and punches off spek's avy, about the pen running outta ink, or cant elevate, those = played to fuck as well.....so overall, i thought spek had a better, connecting punch, so he gets my vote
v/spek |
v/ cali
speks punch was funny as shit but, cali fat lines are synonomous with played |
LMFAO@ SPeks Punch!N Calis Was Nice Just didnt Hit As Hard!
V/Spek |
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