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Dizzee Rascal (2-0) vs. Immense (1-0)
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. If vote threads aren't in your poetry battle thread by sunday you will suffer a loss by Disqualification. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be Disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New rule: first to get 3 votes wins by KO Your Topic: Picture Topic - click here to view picture |
Interesting topic
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LOL..very interesting indeed...Checkin...
Good Luck... |
SCREAMS... Bloodcurdling...whats in view is enough to abolish skin from ones face... Formidable form of appearances...whats seen is to much to embrace... Flesh turned inside out...inner feelings expressed with extravagant emotion... Like a settled sea drifting calm...to a wave shattering,subverting ocean... No escape...step by step the screams emerge louder as the fear escalates... Thoughts become trapped...no way out...honesty potrayed in this self potrait... Fearsome Nightmares...dreams turned into abhorrent self suffering realities... Cadaverous like mentalitys...each agonising scream is another ghastly fatality... As death becomes closer...the true climax reaches its fateful final stages... The reality of the thoughts sink in...suddenly minds become courageous... Thoughts become overwhelmed with endings as to what their about to go through... But still the fear overpowers what the mids state seems to steadily adapt to... Wrong doings kept out...hear no evil...see no evil...speak no evil... But unfortnately evil still polutes our minds and people will be deciteful... And as terror evoles more through each scene... ......................Its unbelievable how much is told through one scream... |
Shit i completley forgot, if its not to late ill post up today
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Multiple voices state their fate filled with despair and hate
Seems too late as their lungs killed joy to echo self state Debate the rusted rumbles as opinions tumble by the second But by the second shout their fumbles just beckoned Reckoned pain bled enternally at the back as thoughts forgot Trying to scream externally but the thoughts had the jaw lock The plague spot of society with opinions as a variety But only the front seen back to back measuring anxiety The propriety to me but why? do we apply these theses? Classes diabetes insulating bypassing the sweetend faeces.... As we embrace the terms racism no longer a threat But classes our regret seperating dreams we come to expect That some respect the american dream slowly fizzles out As only the ones seen forward can scream and shout.... If you dont understand dont vote Lets get some votes! |
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...035#post2224035
^^^links to battles ive voted on...i will edit when ive voted on more... |
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I Usually Give a LONG Detailed explanation but See Im running A Vote shop and Im Gettin packed on Work so I Gotta Hurry up and get back to my job LOL
But If I hade to give my vote to anybody itd be Immense Decent Drop nuttin specail I DEF Think The Stroyline was good although he lacked off in some areas I Feel That He Couldve Did better in with The pic that they choose LOL Dzze Rasc You Have to supply a better storyline and a better use of vocab all the rest of the areas you do good in you do good in staying on topic and you do good in Using Suspsense all though you have a small piece it was good jus not bettr than immense sorry but we all fam Still rii? Ok Peace |
thanks...and props to drama queen on gettin someone to actually come and vote on our battles...:)
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Yeah thats cool, i did rush this
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immense gets it this was close because what one person did bad in, the other did good in, and they both did equally good in categories...however, immenses was a bit better in all of those...
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Closed, Immense wins
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