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Sixth Sense 06-13-05 12:19 PM

...........:the End:..........
 
...........:THE END:..........


It’s final my death is my end and it’s about to occur
People setting me up surprise they try to allure
Me into a short death man it’s my end
No way to begin or to start it’s my end
Man it’s the conclusion of my life I’m in to my final stages
My heart is cold and broken so I show all of my crazy rages
My life is terminated there’s no reason for me to keep going on
Suicidal and homicidal thoughts stored even when my life begun
All these emotions sealed and the intentions that my body has
Never gave help and now I’m asking for health and no one will grab
A hold of me I’m slipping I’m about to fall for eternal darkness no light
Can’t see shit man its obscure cant percept my mind I don’t have sight
Am I blind or is it the white light that I see am I dead or still alive
I can feel myself then I guess I’m all right
Still don’t know what happened why cant I get up something is wrong
Oh! No! can’t hold on I’m weak now I can’t ever be strong
And no what’s rite
My life is struggling is having a fight
My life is like a coupon off it time has expired
But am I going to heaven or the persistently fire

Sixth Sense 06-13-05 12:21 PM

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194836 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194944

Sixth Sense 06-14-05 06:52 AM

uppin this man lets get sum feed on this ill rtf asap aight 1

Sixth Sense 06-14-05 12:21 PM

cmon peeps check this out and leave feed o it aight

Sixth Sense 06-15-05 10:21 AM

ok thnx for the feed man really apppreciate it now anyone else gots more feed
uppin

Sixth Sense 06-16-05 12:35 AM

ok pplz stop countin sheeps and leave feeed ok thnx

Sixth Sense 06-16-05 04:19 PM

aight then i guess pplz is snorin hen cuz noone is leavin feed cmon uppin

B.I.G. 06-16-05 10:24 PM

I liked ur shit,
u got nice creativity, flow, structure, the only thing u need to elevate is vocab... keep up nigga this was good shit

Sixth Sense 06-17-05 09:48 AM

aight then thnx man ill try to work on vocab then thnx for the feed aight rally appreciate it

ppin this for more feed aight

Sixth Sense 06-17-05 09:38 PM

ok lets get sum feed aight pplz cmon stop sleepin

Vick Slate 06-17-05 10:33 PM

quit uppin so much geez lol

lyrics....i like the emotion
flow...bar length long...not many inner rhymes to keep it smooth....more less sayin its off
concept...like it

overall decent drop

Quote:
Am I blind or is it the white light that I see am I dead or still alive

Sixth Sense 06-19-05 07:03 PM

uppin this cmon yall feedback stop sleepin

Sixth Sense 06-20-05 11:07 AM

cmon pplz stop sleepin and leave some feed on this dammit...lol

Sixth Sense 06-22-05 08:57 AM

uppin this pplz stop sleepin and leave ur feed


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