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...........:THE END:.......... It’s final my death is my end and it’s about to occur People setting me up surprise they try to allure Me into a short death man it’s my end No way to begin or to start it’s my end Man it’s the conclusion of my life I’m in to my final stages My heart is cold and broken so I show all of my crazy rages My life is terminated there’s no reason for me to keep going on Suicidal and homicidal thoughts stored even when my life begun All these emotions sealed and the intentions that my body has Never gave help and now I’m asking for health and no one will grab A hold of me I’m slipping I’m about to fall for eternal darkness no light Can’t see shit man its obscure cant percept my mind I don’t have sight Am I blind or is it the white light that I see am I dead or still alive I can feel myself then I guess I’m all right Still don’t know what happened why cant I get up something is wrong Oh! No! can’t hold on I’m weak now I can’t ever be strong And no what’s rite My life is struggling is having a fight My life is like a coupon off it time has expired But am I going to heaven or the persistently fire |
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uppin this man lets get sum feed on this ill rtf asap aight 1
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cmon peeps check this out and leave feed o it aight
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ok thnx for the feed man really apppreciate it now anyone else gots more feed
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ok pplz stop countin sheeps and leave feeed ok thnx
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aight then i guess pplz is snorin hen cuz noone is leavin feed cmon uppin
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I liked ur shit,
u got nice creativity, flow, structure, the only thing u need to elevate is vocab... keep up nigga this was good shit |
aight then thnx man ill try to work on vocab then thnx for the feed aight rally appreciate it
ppin this for more feed aight |
ok lets get sum feed aight pplz cmon stop sleepin
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quit uppin so much geez lol
lyrics....i like the emotion flow...bar length long...not many inner rhymes to keep it smooth....more less sayin its off concept...like it overall decent drop Quote:
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uppin this cmon yall feedback stop sleepin
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cmon pplz stop sleepin and leave some feed on this dammit...lol
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uppin this pplz stop sleepin and leave ur feed
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