Jersey Lite vs Sabotage
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No Running
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 06:33 PM

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Jersey Lite has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 09:46 PM.

i been in jail you've had six month to perpare son
but still you only gonna shine if you in my glare son
the only street you no has the first name maryl
in the game game you outa place like elves and will farrel
this is like phone sex because you geting fuck on this line
i went to jail but you staying behide my bars this time
chris reevers styles cause flow is retarded
how many times was your record was restarted

a little weak but i'm just getting back to it nah mean

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 04:30 AM.

Ima take it easy on you nigga im full of vengeance and hate
Who really cares? Miami already burned up what Trenton makes*
Yeah right you gonna beat sabotage, u need to go back to stand-up
This faggot can’t hold me, I’ll break through ya damn handcuffs**
You used to be A.K.A so u left, ya skillz was lame
Make this nigga throw up blood like he was rolling with Game
You one of the best on this site? Yeah you like to fantasize
Jersey Lite aint enough for me, I got too big of an appetite



*Miami Heat beat New Jersey Nets in playoffs..Trenton, NJ
**His sig

you should be able to understand everything but thats just for us slow people

Voted For: sabotage

betta punchlinez n´flow I liked that shit alot there wuz sum rhymes I wasnt feelin but it wuz nothin that made me think this wuz bad...keep it up dawg

now the other dude he got good punchlinez n´flow but nothin that blow me off my mind ya know what I mean....and still I dont like niggaz who always sayin out loud that they spend sum time in jail.....get over it nigga live on n´forget about it

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Voted For: sabotage

This was A Alright Battle!liked Sabotag's vErse better!:
Explanation:

Ima take it easy on you nigga im full of vengeance and hate
Who really cares? Miami already burned up what Trenton makes*
This Was Weak 6/10
Yeah right you gonna beat sabotage, u need to go back to stand-up
This faggot can’t hold me, I’ll break through ya damn handcuffs**
^Weak Personal 6/10
You used to be A.K.A so u left, ya skillz was lame
Make this nigga throw up blood like he was rolling with Game
^ok 6.5/10
You one of the best on this site? Yeah you like to fantasize
Jersey Lite aint enough for me, I got too big of an appetite
^Weak Closer 6/10
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Jersey:

i been in jail you've had six month to perpare son
but still you only gonna shine if you in my glare son
^Weak Punch 6/10
the only street you no has the first name maryl
in the game game you outa place like elves and will farrel
^Real Weak 5.5/10
this is like phone sex because you geting fuck on this line
i went to jail but you staying behide my bars this time
^Better 6.5/10
chris reevers styles cause flow is retarded
how many times was your record was restarted
^Weak 5.5/10
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This Was A Decent Batte!Sab i seen you spit alot better homie!n Jersey i never seen ya spit!so this is a first!but Sab got this Battle!
Punches=Sab
Personalz=Sab
WP=Sab
Structure=Draw
Opener=Sab
closer=sab
No Need To proceed....
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upping and ghost you prolly seen me spit but you didn't no it this is A.K.A.

uppping for people to really read each verse lol jk but for real uppin

Voted For: sabotage

GOOD:

Flow - Kinda Tie, But Jersey lost it in the last two lines
Structure - Tie
Punchlines - Sabotage
vocab - Sabotage
Wordplay - nope
Nameplay - Sabotage

BAD:

forced Rhymes - no
Forced Multis - no
Non Sence - no

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - no
Creative Punches - Sabotage
creative multi's - no

PERSONALS:
I saw one hard hittin from sabotage, so that's enough for this..

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Tie
Closing: Sabotage

COMMENT:
This battle wasn't good, Sabotage took it easy on you and even though he won, nigga keep up with the punches n try ta use more wordplay.... keep up

Sabotage: 7/10
Jerzey: 4/10

V/ Sabotage

yes...up 3-0.....

.....keep them votes comin........

Voted For: sabotage

sabotoge:
Ima take it easy on you nigga im full of vengeance and hate
Who really cares? Miami already burned up what Trenton makes*
^^^GOOD OPENER/PERSONAL
Yeah right you gonna beat sabotage, u need to go back to stand-up
This faggot can’t hold me, I’ll break through ya damn handcuffs**
^^^^ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL
You used to be A.K.A so u left, ya skillz was lame
Make this nigga throw up blood like he was rolling with Game
^^^I RECENTLY SAID A THROW UP BLOOD LINE...BUT DIS WAS DECENT
You one of the best on this site? Yeah you like to fantasize
Jersey Lite aint enough for me, I got too big of an appetite
^^FANTASIZE & APPETITE DONT RYHME...U FORCE DAT


jersey lite:
i been in jail you've had six month to perpare son
but still you only gonna shine if you in my glare son
^^NO
the only street you no has the first name maryl
in the game game you outa place like elves and will farrel
^^^I DIDN'T GET IT
this is like phone sex because you geting fuck on this line
i went to jail but you staying behide my bars this time
^^^DA 1ST LINE WAS DOPE..BUT DA SECOND FUKKED EEVRYTHING UP
chris reevers styles cause flow is retarded
how many times was your record was restarted
^^WHUT????LOL

V/SAB....DIS WAS A WUN SIDED BATTLE