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CARMA SUTRA 06-13-05 07:05 PM

my introduction to this site..
 
this is a quick keystyle piece...an yes i write horrorcore..lol..

mothersfuckers..you can quote me spitting..holding weapons..
with dirty sneakers full of dog shit i stepped in..
LIKE WHAT..aiming a pitchfork at your nuts..while slashing ya throat an stepping..
my flows--NU-CLEAR..you drop a hot verse once in a while but really--WHO CARES..!!
i'am the chick you dudes fear..the reason more than half of you are 21 an starting to lose hair..
YOU GET BRUISED HERE!!..no small contusions..picture me losing..
thats something 'david blane' could'nt do in illusions..!!
hellbreed nigga's..it's not that confusing..
most you cats not on my level..your just a small thing like a handbag i tote ..TWO TWO'S IN!!
jokers wild..ace's high..gamble with lives..
leave you in shambles..bloody from knives..
on t.v..screaming..PRAISE GOD..I'AM LUCKY I'AM AIVE!!
you fags can't see me high,on dust..
you die..from my murderoues designer thrust..
designed to punture ya lungs..an squeeze the breath outta you while i HOG TIE YOU UP!!
NIGGA'S ACTING LIKE JANE DON'T DROP!!
look i can leave r.v for 10 years an still come back an claim a spot..
i got more balls than most you faggots..plus ..you only battle has beens an complain alot..
QUIT THE THEATRIC'S..
i smash bastards in the best of blood match's..
shooting blind into a crowd..
then howling like a pack of ravaged dogs over the bodies of whom ever a slug catch's..
MATCH WIT'S!!??
i smash with one tit..getting my clit licked..
popping a clip in..playing a game of 'BIT WIZ'..with wiz kids..
while making my opposition back flip on a dirty mattress full of needles from pipes from crack an herion addict's..
i'am a bird of prey..ripping out foes vertabrae...
tourching any words you say!!
I DON'T GIVE A FUCK WHAT YOU WERE IN THE PAST--YOUR A HERB TODAY!!

CARMA SUTRA 06-13-05 07:10 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194944
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194660
my links^^^

K.MurD3r 06-13-05 07:19 PM

"...my flows--NU-CLEAR..you drop a hot verse once in a while but really--WHO CARES..!!
i'am the chick you dudes fear..the reason more than half of you are 21 an starting to lose hair..."
^hahaha, fuckin crazy

This shit was sick as hell shawty.
9/10.
Keep it poppin.

Young Drama 06-13-05 07:19 PM

Not That Good

3/10

And Heres A Tip

Dont Post Right After I Up My Shit When Your New

Dervla 06-13-05 07:35 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by K.MurD3r
"...my flows--NU-CLEAR..you drop a hot verse once in a while but really--WHO CARES..!!
i'am the chick you dudes fear..the reason more than half of you are 21 an starting to lose hair..."
^hahaha, fuckin crazy

This shit was sick as hell shawty.
9/10.
Keep it poppin.




Stupid..........................................

K.MurD3r 06-13-05 07:37 PM

My opinion, and your sposed to judge tha fuckin topic and not MurD3r bitch.

Ghost 06-13-05 07:44 PM

Mayne Im gettin tired of you talkin shyt homeboy!(K Murder) why dont you go fckin post an OPEN mic N show us ya SKILLZ!oh and By the way CARMA homie!this was a Decent Piece Could Have Been Better!Could HAve used Some Nice Punchess N meta N also some better Wordplay!but its all good KEEP YA HEAD Up!And RETURN THE FAVOR in my diss to TWISTED n WALL STREET!*(Link Below in My Signature)*

CARMA SUTRA 06-13-05 08:26 PM

no doubt ..an this was just a quick keystyle..i'll drop a serious one in a second on this bitch cat talking shit to me..fuck'em..

K.MurD3r 06-14-05 09:26 AM

Ghost if you were readin my opinion, I gave Carma's piece a 9/10.
I wasnt dissin her.
Read befo you speak on MurD3r.

MyNamesGrafhYall 06-14-05 09:32 AM

It wuz iight, nuthin special....2 long & 2 many boribng rhymes, up ur wordplay, nyce punches, need better & more creative wordplay, everythin wuz 2 simple within ur rhymes, kno wat am sayin? keep droppin tho'....good job, do yo thang


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