CRI$$TYLE vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines..
3 votes=tko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


lets get it goin

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 02:38 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed... went over 10 lines

I hope you dropped your verse cuz im done

Mines a quickie

Cri$$tyle has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 12:54 PM.

**You think you run RV...smh lemme show you WHO runs RV in one verse



Fuck your 'talk' your weaker than a 'whisper'
I make you bleed once every '31st' like your sister*
Fuck eating you, i'm -lyrically sick- so i just have to 'spit ya',
Like Tennis playas that don't match, your "balls" isn't with ya,*2
Your like a windescreen on a foggy night cuz your a 'diluted picture'
So excuse me mister..

Have your organs sliped off cuz the nurse wanted to get fucked,
Your steps aint right yet, because these shoes don't fit ya,
Your style is cheaper than money, cuz you get robbed like a Gift Shop,
Step to me? but your manhood got merked by a lip gloss!!
I don't wanna take your life cuz it couldn't pay back the amount my whip costs!


1 more....Like a lift that can't elevate your DESTINED to get fucked,*3
If we we're to battle on the phone then i'll be the one calling the "shots"


**Said he runs RV


*Girls have their period every month
*2 A tennis match with no tennis balls
*3 An elevator that is stuck on ground floor





Nigga...nobody RUNS Rap Verse apart from the Administrator

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 01:14 PM.

stop it child,when i show up in california wit a glock & smile.
i aint gon be "openin champagne" but ima "POP-crisstyle".
fagget u aint gota sick style,but u callin me a bitch?..wow.
if u have a 'kid' i'll do like da "knicks" & get rid of "cris-child".
hold up cuzz u 1 of dem dudes dat get tuff after they roll up bud.
'send clipz 2 ya stomach' u aint "damu" but bet u "throw up blood".
been on rv since 2004 no1 know's u,now ima do more than own u.
fam ya record is like da "pistons in da finals" cuzz its "0-2".*
you 1 of dem wack mc's i just go thru........so stop actin frantic.
neva cum with new shit he "Recycle" more than captain planet".

*his record is 0-2....and at dis time da pistons r down 0-2

i do run rv....and u spit 12 lines...and da rules say 10

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Easy win for Marv, should be a KO

Marv came with the punches, dope wordplay, and nice personals. CRI$$TYLE, You have potential, but your verse lacked punches, personals, wordplay, and skill. Try being more creative and not just rambling bullshit. Make your punches actually hit him. You had a whole bunch of played lines in your verse, so just try being more creative and consistent.

V/ Marv

Marv dont even trip over him going over the line limit. Look at his verse, then look at your verse. Then look at his verse again, and laugh. :)

uuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnn

Why are you insulting me? i dont know you


so your vote doesn't count

0-0

Oh and FUCK your talk bitch ass nigga, i been on this site since 2004 but i aint an active user..hell yeah i don't even do text

your just a cocky lollipop fruitcake nigga thinking he runs RV cuz yall got a lil bunch of living condoms around you bitch please...i'm representing westside aight so don't start screaming my nation while i'm around herb.

goddamn it's 0-0 the other guy was hating! laughing at my verse? calling it bulshit?
the kid didn't even break it down like this

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Goddamn i gotta school you niggas now?

lmaoooooo shut da fuck up fagget fuck you and da west side...bitch dis battles gettin closed i tried da let u live u went over da lin limit and u talkin shit so now u'll be 0-3..lmaoooooooooooooo

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 - Good spit, had some good wordplay and the punches were landin' strong.

Best Line - stop it child,when i show up in california wit a glock & smile.
i aint gon be "openin champagne" but ima "POP-crisstyle".

Worst Line - hold up cuzz u 1 of dem dudes dat get tuff after they roll up bud.
'send clipz 2 ya stomach' u aint "damu" but bet u "throw up blood".

Cri$$tyle - iight spit, you had an iight flow, and your punches were decent.

Best Line - Fuck your 'talk' your weaker than a 'whisper'
I make you bleed once every '31st' like your sister*

Worst Line - Step to me? but your manhood got merked by a lip gloss!!
I don't wanna take your life cuz it couldn't pay back the amount my whip costs!

OVERALL - Marv won this battle hands down, he had the better punches, wordplay, and flow. Cris if you goin' to try to take on vets, you need better wordplay and harder punches.

Vote - MarvJay