Tekneek vs {D.N.A.}
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-17-05 at 01:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

{D.N.A.} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 01:53 PM.

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 01:57 PM.

I’ll make your ass-salute-me, battling me is a loss Absolutely
When you accepted, you might as well of said “Stab-n-shoot-me”
You lost like bad-navigation, couldn’t get help with collaboration
You must have mad-frustration, cuz the only thing you cum with is m.asturbation
I’m bolder-n-keen, rip your shoulder-n-spleen
I told-ya-I’m-mean, but you’re just a stupid wolverine*
I’ll pop you like an ollie-ya’ll,* prolly-bawl
Cuz you blow like a trolley-call,* so I’ll serve you like a volleyball
You’re scared so I drop-first, since you’ve started you got-worse
Pussy, I’ll make your t.wat-burst, cook you like bratwurst
Throw-yer-best and you’re still below-the-rest
I’ll blow-yer-chest, and like they say: “You know-the-rest”*

*Trolley-call: Air blows from the whistle
*Ollie-ya’ll: When you ollie on a skateboard, they say you ‘pop’ it

ayo

Im not gone Need a STRATEGY just to Beat thiz Chump, Cuz my Tekneek iz just a mere Squeeze of tha Pump/
Thiz Egotistical Kid Needz Every Extra Kick just to think hiz Dick iz Growin up just a lil Bit/(Tekneek)play on ya name
So before theze punchez hit, Grab ya lip and hold on to ya Jawbone/
Im sendin you total Chaos and Anarchy til every law gone/
I have no Choice but to Kill a kid, ill drill ya head, look through ya neck and watch how ya Liver Spread/
I wanted a Real Match, someone should have sent me a Lighter and Cigarrettes/
But now I gotta BURN YA like the Smoke inside of thiz Niggaz Chest/


damn i need to keep rappin to get back to my old level but on you dude...Good Luck to ya

Where's All The Voters At...........
.........this A Tight Battle So Dont Sleep On It.

Voted For: Tekneek

punches....tekneek
personals...D.N.A.
multiz...tekneek
wordpay...tekneek
creativity...tekneek
text flow...none
structure...none
humor...none
enjoyment...tekneek

D.N.A. needs serious help but overall Tekneek took it cuz of

-multiz
-wordplay
-punches

next time try some personals


return dat fav also kid...my battle wit souljah

thx dog...decent vote.......................
uppin

uppidy up up...
yall dont sleep on diz!!!!!!!!!!!!

lets get these votes in

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Voted For: Tekneek

Tekneek- your verse was nice n all....had some funny but yet some nice punches...your structure was ahh blah...i mean should be fixed up a little ...maybe take away * < them n all...but overall 7.9/10...you got this battle because you had a better verse but yet better punches because they connected well & just hit better...

DNA- your verse was aight too....but your punches....were a little weak at some places...they didnt really connect and all...your strcuture was aight but should use a little fixin upper...but overall 5.9/10...because your punches were just weaker n all...

*Hit The Battle In My Sig PLEASE...Or I Will get this vote removed...* Thanks...