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1ndeph vs Un'Touched
Battle Rules: 6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 30 min to check in 30 to spit Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-14-05 at 05:33 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
1ndeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 05:04 PM.
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Un'Touched has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 05:05 PM.
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You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work (fall arrives and labor day is all that happens in september) you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. |
Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb"....
Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... |
Upping for votes haha Crew votes are allowed considering were in the same crew |
Voted For: Un'Touched
ahhh this wuz a great match up i'd havta say that it wuz pretty equal xcept for un'touched's vocab and he had more multiz this wuz a good ass battle tho really short but ehhh |
Voted For: 1ndeph
Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb".... Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some... ^^stretched n weak, lots of filler Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration... Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination"..... ^^nope, lack of wit n complexity Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe... I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me... ^^better but still weak Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"... Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot... ^^wack....wheres the wit? .. You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me. That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring. ^^wasnt feelin it. its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises.. I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates. ^^dope personal n wording(connected) september you joined,a loss is all its worth.. cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work (fall arrives and labor day is all that happens in september) ^^decent you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit. you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate. ^^lol,.nah... . . indeph for having the single witty personal punch that connected out of the entire duration of this battle you both need to step it up n bring better more complex concepts if you wanna get ya wins up...... |
Daz you supposed to DR us.YOU FAGFACEHOESLUTNUT
People should know I can't take constructive critisism!!!! fuck you daz lol next! |
haha 1-1 uppin for some more votes ......................... |
uppin this shit................^^^^^^.............. |
uppin for fuckin votes.................................. |
damn its a voting madhouse!!! calm down with all the votes god damn!
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Voted For: 1ndeph
Indeph- your verse was nice i thought...you had some good punches...they connected and hit nicely...Had some good personals also...structure was plain and simple easy to read n all dat...but overall 8.5/10.....cuz you had better punches and personals... Untouched- your verse was nice too...but your punches were aight but some were weak..or didnt connect too well honestly...your structure was also plain and simple...easy to read n all...But also you really didnt have any personals...but overall 7.4/10.....you had decent punches...but some were just weak & you really didnt have any personals either... |
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