watch nd learn...
 

these mystical visions, of persistance incisions, blindin me
like a slice thru tha retina, im get in a, pain in my mind indeed
cant think of lyrics, no nouns and verbs, so i smoke pounds of herbs
and get high, elevated to a new height, beyond all words
no longer does the dictionary, confine my speech
newbs to rap, gotta lot to learn i gotta lot to teach
im very wise in my ways, despised in my days
not followin tha chosen path, hoes and cash, it was a jus phase
now im thinkin on new levels, bass and treble, adjustin
the words i wrote, wont erode, never get old, never rustin
herbs is disgustin, comin at me wit this gun shit
i spit 3 setups, wait for tha punch, then they out in one hit
theyre mental capacity, cant match wit me, i expand
and overwrite the written when i spitten, whats next man
i can go on forever till time subsides to darkness and rhyme
all thats left is langauge, fuck tha stainless, i kill thru my lines

:thumbup: thats hott

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uppingggggggggg

dawggy u spitten hot fIAHHHH, that shit was as hott, as j lo on a summer day........corny lol......nice structure-10/10........vocab-7-10.........multi's-8-10.....overall 25/30 nice dropp, u keep progressin and droppin u gon get o/m of the year award........maybe........lol holla back at my o/m mike jackson diss lol

i wish i could get tha OM award.... *hint hint* nominate me lol not on this tho this aint all that great i got turned down by tha council wit this verse.... apperantly they dont like my shit... uppin

thanks man.. uppin for more feed

uppin this piece.. gimme some feed

up up 1-2 up up 1-2

chea chea...shits hot...idk y they turned u dwn..they check out ur otha shit...o well...i liked it ...good....fuego....fire...feu....Feuer...o fogo....il fuoco...lol...its fire in 6 languages....izno shady!!!

iight straight up kid *izno shady* upping for some more feed

lemme get some feedback on this right here..

post some feed people

you def had some good vocab in this .....flow was onpoint....ya structure was iight....i felt the opener the most....yea, yu got talent...keep writing

return the favor?...Birth of a Goddess.

iight thanks for tha love girl. uppin for more.