Dizzee Rascal vs slik flo
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-15-05 at 05:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

slik flo has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 02:34 PM.

CHECK IT...

GO BACK HOME...UR JUST A DIZZEE WANNABE
WEN YOU GROW UP...U AINT GONNA HAVE A FAMILY
U NO WHY...COZ I'M DA BEST FREESTYLIN MC IN HISTORY

I'M THE ILLEST REALEST MC,I'LL MAKE YA HEAD IN A SPIN
COZ EVERYBODY KNOWS HUS GONNA WIN..

U AINT A RASCAL HOMEBOI....
YOUR JUST A BUMBA CLAAT
NO TRACE THAT..UR GAY FAMILYS A RAT

I SAW WHAT YOU DID LAST SUMMER...
UR DUMD DAD..and fat mum DIED...WHAT A BUMMER...

UR FAMILYS A DISGRACE TO THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE.THAT JUST MAKES ME SICKEN..
THAT YO MUM GAVE BIRTH TO A BURNT CHICKEN

Hurry Up I Aint Got All Day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 04:03 PM.

Give a pound donation as u lie looking from the foor in admiration
My fist'l let the expiration on flow-age with gradual deformation *
Wiv creation splitting organisms str8 faced son it aint funny
Ull never see a sick-ill-sell didnt u know ethiopians have no money
As i son thee as u run home left skinned down to the bone
Cus i make battles hard for flow like competetive kidney stones
Home in on the known leave u homeless cus u seem new-to-me
And branch wins? Nobody see sick-nest like constant immunity *2
Getting screwed over g, open micz like this bar just skipped
.................................................. ........................................
So cant u see im working on ko's see as i employ three
And dates? Know that nobody calls sick like loyal
employees

* flowage is the gradual deformation
*2 Sickness/nest hence the branch bit, blah lol

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

damn waste of bars huh @ dizzee

lmaoo


punches...dizzee
personals...slik u tried
creativity...dizzee
wordplay...dizzee
multiz...none
humor...dizzee[ tha ethiopian line
vocab...dizzee needs more tho
enjoyment...dizzee

SLIK FLO....needs ALOT of work....easy win V=Dizzee Rascal

Werd 1-0 nice looking swoooooooooooooooooooooooosh

swoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooosh

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

dizzie u shouldnt be herb bashin yo..................

Still Uppin Votes................:thumbup::thumbup::thumbup::t humbup:

sickseed son...........you make me sick...........go take a dump man....yo wurds are tight but loose

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 

uppin for Rascal............................................ ............

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

GO BACK HOME...UR JUST A DIZZEE WANNABE
WEN YOU GROW UP...U AINT GONNA HAVE A FAMILY
U NO WHY...COZ I'M DA BEST FREESTYLIN MC IN HISTORY

I'M THE ILLEST REALEST MC,I'LL MAKE YA HEAD IN A SPIN
COZ EVERYBODY KNOWS HUS GONNA WIN..

U AINT A RASCAL HOMEBOI....
YOUR JUST A BUMBA CLAAT
NO TRACE THAT..UR GAY FAMILYS A RAT

I SAW WHAT YOU DID LAST SUMMER...
UR DUMD DAD..and fat mum DIED...WHAT A BUMMER...

UR FAMILYS A DISGRACE TO THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE.THAT JUST MAKES ME SICKEN..
THAT YO MUM GAVE BIRTH TO A BURNT CHICKEN

LoL!!!!!!That was horrible.Did you read the tutorials before doin this shit?No punches watsoever.READ TUTORIALS.


Give a pound donation as u lie looking from the foor in admiration
My fist'l let the expiration on flow-age with gradual deformation *
Wiv creation splitting organisms str8 faced son it aint funny
Ull never see a sick-ill-sell didnt u know ethiopians have no money
As i son thee as u run home left skinned down to the bone
Cus i make battles hard for flow like competetive kidney stones
Home in on the known leave u homeless cus u seem new-to-me
And branch wins? Nobody see sick-nest like constant immunity *2
Getting screwed over g, open micz like this bar just skipped

^^You didn't need to post that much cause the other guy doesn't even know how to make a verse.I'm still rolling on how stupuid the other guy's verse was.Anyways...ur punches/flow was nutin special...you could get merked easy by some vets.

Vote-Dizzie(return the fovaor in the link or vote will be dq'd.)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851
^^vote in it dizzie rascal

Voted For: slik flo

GOOD:

Flow - Tie
Structure - Rascal
Punchlines - Tie
vocab - Slik
Multi's - hmmmm Slik
Wordplay - nope
Nameplay - Slik

BAD:

forced Rhymes - nope
Forced Multis - nope
Non Sence - nope

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - nope
Creative Punches - Slik
creative multi's - no

PERSONALS:
No good Personals

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Slik
Closing: Tie

COMMENT:
Slik had better creativity and better punches, he had a better opening, and both had good flow, so the winner is slik

V/ Slick