rv.com rnd2 vs phenom PUNCHLINES GALORE (drop links!)
 

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phenom diss rnd 2

lyrics..

stick em up! you know what i came for!
get tha pump hit em up! its case closed/
sick em dog, get em off, i waste foes!/
rock tha mic, drop tha hype have tha stage blown!/

sit back relax,witcha ya bitch ass!/
ya get slashed by tha blade of my pick axe/
yerra small fry shittttt cat,/
you should learn not to mess widda big mac...
get back, you really not ready f dis/
gotta machetti gripd, severin ya neck n ya limbs/
rydin wif four horsemen i gotda torch scorchin/
he got weinaz in his grill like george forman/
phenominal its time ta fall. im ona roll/
takin ya wax off u should call me armoral/
this is tha art a war. start more beef than a carnavore/
illl give ya a "sharp thought" dart a "sword thru ya skull" heart n pour/
gas on ya mandabol, grabahold ofa match ima animol, blast u from canada
blap! u bedda hope thatcha casket aint flammable/
o pleeez u aint tryna fuck wif o g's
cuz i kno ya "countrys flag" n i "smoke leaves"/
ya not fuckin wif tha 7 oh three/
cuz mah rimes are "off tha scale", like a "fresh o z"/
n these lines aint phat, they obese,"obie's"/
like i got "trice" to write em, straight from tha dome peice/
i open my mouth n shyne like gold teeth/
ill beatchu to a bloody pulp n leave tha pulp beat/
ohh sheet, ya gurl betta not kiss n tell/
im "satan, impregnatem," "makin life" a "livin hell"/
wish em well. bitch ill letchu hit this el/
wif a o n two s'es,shit ill letchu mix em round/ (l o s s)
sit em down, wif his face on tha canvas/
ya facin a "mantis" man youu betta "pray" fer a cannon/
dont care who ya clan is, i came to make damage/
and im anch chis ta haveya sprayin ya pampaz/
take it fer granted ill leave u "jacked sonn", like "janet"/
tha last one to panic got his ass jumped n handed/
back to um by bandits, slashup tha amatuers
you hear me "click"n "see tha light" flash up like "cameras"/
cats wanna bang widdus, i got this pleez/
ill leave him "cut short" like i "chopped his knees"/
off ya feet, gotta lodda ways to rock this beat/
stop n peep tha new era dude ya obsolete/
im two steeppps ahead of youuu doooo tha math/
how you plan to "light me up" wen u showd u "blew tha match"/
ill leave u bruised n patched up choose ya path
cuz, like "dickie roberts" ya needa "loose tha act"/
chump ya done, jump tha gun u wantin some?/
tha frontins done,punk now tha guns pumpin son/
ima son of a bitch, bumpin with, thunderous hits/
"feedin ya punches" like ya gota "hunga f' fists"/
now son, dont be mad cuz u lost round 1/(verse me)
even if u rigged tha votes widda fixed outcome/
now it might sound dumb wen i snatch tha crown from/
tha toppa tha ring poppin them things,like, bloaw ya dun!/

now how many lines duz it take to catch tha big fish?/
im like fuck tha bait. reach in n grab this bitch/
damn, u know ima pimp bitch/
ys that? cuz i putcha chick on mah hitlist/ o
n i wolk widda knickle plated biscut/
pistol whip a giant, switch it up n taze a midgit/
this kid is goin "belly up" just like a "middrift"/
gettha hint shyt, i got feet, u got inches/
lemme finish, u wanna trade? n maybe ull get vicious/
illl "take it inch by inch" "give ya defeat", bitch ya get it?/yesssssss!

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2217544
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195076

hahaha, nice man, decent beat good flow was feelin the punches....smoke leaves was nice.

god damnnnnn...lol phenom you in some Deep shit like standin in 8ft of menore...lol punches i was feelin...

-rydin wif four horsemen i gotda torch scorchin/
he got weinaz in his grill like george forman/..

-o pleeez u aint tryna fuck wif o g's
cuz i kno ya "countrys flag" n i "smoke leaves"/...

-ohh sheet, ya gurl betta not kiss n tell/
im "satan, impregnatem," "makin life" a "livin hell"/


and many more but those were just fire...damn son you comin hard against phenom huh..only thing i aint like was how you dubbed every single line..and yo flow was too slow at times..na'mean but still fire son ...phenom i wish you the best...but remember you gotta come hard iight be 1ne..

i already told you how u killed it man....damn :thumbup:

this is good but i don't feel that the punches were that nice some were played

^^Feel Tha Same Way..And Tha Flow Didnt MAke It any Better...And Some Were So Techinical..Tehy Were Bette rOff As a Textcee Verse..Cauz if you aint post tha verse..Most Niggaz If not all Wouldnt get Soem Of Tha Punches..It was Coo....Keep Droppin..

technical = only smart emcees will understand... i dont want dumbfuckers listening to my tracks...

Look Nigga..You Dont Even Get It..You Missin My Point..Why Did You Post Th aLyrics..??..So It Could Be Understandable..Right..?..If It Nots Needed then Dont Post It..And Plus the Way you Put these "...." Over Certain Words In Ya Verse Make sIt More Liek a Text Verse...You Want us To Look at These Words Ove rOteh rWords In Tha Lines..And Be Liek "Oh..He MEans This N That.."..Or "Thsi is Connecte Wit Tha Word In Tha Line Before This One"..Cau ztha thing about "Loss" was iight...and i didnt liek tha fact you had to quote the words..Becuase truly i would have missed tha punch..

And I Dont Miss Punchlines..I Understand Anything..

~EaRLy~

thats y i wrote tha lyrics.... follow along wif me.... lol

this was aight flow was gud lyrics was overall decent drop g/l phenom lol

ak, they to show the wordplay that some herbs wont understand...simple as!

^THANK YOU!... nyce break down daubs, u really captured the main principles.. lol

ah'ight son....yea son u elevating a few months ago this woulda been ass from u, jus being real son...but now u workign wit something...you had a few strong lines u surprised me son....not bad at all...much much props to that...I have gotten use to hearing played/wack punches on RV so props to u for some originality....your flow was ah'ight a lil shaky in spots...delivery was shaky too but nothing serious...I liked beat....overall...7.5/10....keep elevating son...good shit..much repsect.......1

^ yea u know u one of tha very few heads on rv that i respect FOR REAL.. lol so props rite back atcha

but what duz this mean???

ah'ight son....yea son u elevating a few months ago this woulda been ass from u, jus being real son