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Mentalz 06-15-05 11:38 PM

I stop
 
I watch.. Time pause then backflip my reality
So im lookin back at my past fucked mentality
I see mistakes, corrections, threats & stress
But right next, I see correct love & feel blessed

I walk.. as movement speeds up the spin cycle
Rinse, repeat as I creep back and spit cyphers
To cover up my failing, trailing educational habbits
I ignore my integrity, it's hereditary so it happens

I jog.. right past 20, were finally, im makin money
Attitudes changed i've got crossroads to engage
So I stage a play & prepare to set myself in motion
Watch the ocean, set up stocks & smarts, im hope'n

I run.. Cause I kinda fucked up and messed around
Face in the ground as I struggle to muffle the sound
Had plans laid out, nearly paved my time-line thorough
Now I burrow deep in my soul to explode the unknown
To expose the precise moment where I went off-road
So I think ill go back in a flash and relive what happened

I watch.. I listen..
As I spot the instant..
Im lost.. Im wishin..
That path was different..

I stop.


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Christianite 06-15-05 11:45 PM

this was good man, but a lil hard to read with the white font color, but otherwise it was good.

Mentalz 06-15-05 11:55 PM

Thanks for the feedback man. Appreciate it.

Mentalz 06-16-05 08:08 PM

ppin the piece.

Mentalz 06-20-05 12:25 AM

Uppin, thanks for the feedback


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