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Magic5 06-16-05 02:14 AM

Murdz vs Mimesis
 
Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 06-16-05 at 02:44 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 06-16-05 02:17 AM

Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-16-05 02:17 AM.

System 06-16-05 02:27 AM

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-16-05 02:27 AM.

Magic5 06-16-05 02:54 AM

Time to de-rust myself. All the personals I use are legit.

Stick to the small font, son. Nothing you type will be big anyway.

Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec

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Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins

Fuck outta here..

BiZzO 06-16-05 03:08 AM

My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit
Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch
Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin
Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! *
Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards
Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords
I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit
Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!!

* necklace - neckless!

Good Luck Homie

Magic5 06-16-05 04:34 AM

I knew the small font was coming :shoot:


:o..

BiZzO 06-16-05 05:13 AM

lmao.. damnit and i was seriously thinkin i should leave it normal size.. but stoopid me.. :thumbup:

Daubs 06-16-05 05:54 AM

This was feedback posted for Murdz
 
damn, nice mlties fam, nice punches mim.

good luck.

Intrepid 06-16-05 06:33 AM

mim owned. ez .

Dervla 06-16-05 07:05 AM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
Checking This Out.....................................

King Solo 06-16-05 07:17 AM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
my opinion.....mim took this

murdz....yea you had the multies going on and some ok wordplay in there at points, but mostly you were talkin shit and it seriously lacked for any kind of effective punches, i think the highlight of ya verse was the slim-to-nun line......

mim.....can tell ya a little rusty, an ok drop though still, you had some good punches in there, some not so good, that lil cali one wasn't all that hot, but the following bar was funny i thought.....

aight drops from both....both were lackin in places
but mimesis takes it in my opinion

BiZzO 06-16-05 07:22 AM

thanks for ur feed solo... and daubz appreciated....

¤ÐÅž¤ 06-16-05 02:20 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit
Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch
^^lots of meaningless multi's
Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin
Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! *
^^nope, flow fell off in setup too
Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards
Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords
^^blah, wheres the punch?
I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
^^flow fell way off in setup, punch is generic n lame
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
^^ok, but whats with all the filler
face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit
Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!!
^^eh, wouldve been good used against a different opponent
like hotshh... but it had no releventcy in this battle n was weak....
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overall you need to work on not putting tonnes of filler in your bars, make your personals connect, actually just get some in your verse first...... so many bars were wack with
meaningless multi's, your better off not to right with them if you can't use them right...
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Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec
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^^decent, good opener, straight to the point
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Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
^^lol, good nameplay....connected
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
^^decent
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
^^good personal, simple but good
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
^^lol,...decent
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins
^^closer was iffy to me....
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overall i was feeling your personals n i could tell you didnt bother putting filler into your verse like murdz did , best line was the mu-line, shit was creative n had me crackin up..
both dropped decent but murdz had no personals n just generic blahness...

Magic5 06-16-05 08:04 PM

Word. Thanks for the vote.

1-0 Me.

Holla at cha boobies.

BiZzO 06-17-05 02:02 AM

werd.... gud battle mimesis ... uppin for thisssssssssssssssssssssss


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