Rhyming like EMINEM
 

Rhyming like EMINEM

Above the rim with stats like brims on hats sit on
Heads write legit threads get read like the book of Psalm
On all mission like tall technicians fix computers and mix
Drinks at Hooters on my spare time, my affair blind and sick
My girl plays around and lay down with other brothers
Got lovers on the side don’t use rubbers with pride and another
Thing stay stress for a DNA test don’t know baby mine or others
In a failed relation folk wanna bail out this boat stinking
And sinking like the titanic, a type panic I face when thinking
When we walk arm and arm I’m being stalked and alarmed
By cats I don’t know they won’t go they insist on bringing me harm

ayo u in wot the Darkside or not..give me a holla

wow u want this kid in ya crew?..........

....u suck too.......

Straight Aim thanks for the props for real

aight...so that mean ur in???....and sabotage shut the fuck up go peep one of my newest drops...u probably sayin i suck cuz u too fuckin dumb ta even look at my new shit....any way Maddrapper...just pm me if u gone be..cuz i need as much homies i can get in my crew

why you tryna rap like eminem?? ya need to find ya own style, son.

yo sick one..u wanna join the darkside?

whats ya line-up fam?

find ya own style this was ight....and sabotge suck a dick u butt weasel

ha man darkside u fuckin wit sab u fuckin wit me..i'll take on ya crew by myself AUDIO,TEXT,TOPICAL,POETRY, all that..soo sit back.....

Lol@ everyone in the council saying the words "i'll take on ya whole crew by myself"

EDIT


I feel I should give my oppinion and not freepost.

Aight 1st off you NEED to find your own style.
Rap is at its prime when you're yourself feel me.
you'll enjoy it twice as much when u stop piggybacking
on other MC's styles.Believe me we got cats who do it
now and don't even realise it.I wasn't really feelin it that much.
And definetly don't name a song "rhyming like eminem"
you can't go anywhere staying in his shadow.

lol we all could and i already got this kid ripped witha few lines spit in 10 mins

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195517

yo madrapper u duckin now bitch......1 on1 text battle.....

WOW THIS SITE GOT SOME WHACK ASS NON hIP hOP BITCHES ALL THEM POST ON HERE THESE FUCKS GOT THE NERVES TO TELL ME GET MY OWN STYLE. (well anyway thanks for the responses but you should come better than that doe)

they just tryin ta help u out cuz u know u do have ta have ur own style ta really feel good bout ur dope feedback but they didnt say ur shit was wack so...just take it as advice..this was aight..good rhymes and multi's..sumthin nice and quick...but u heard the rest already bout the style..this gets a 7.5/10