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*UnOpened Eyes*
With no warning, your eyes close The void becomes never-ending. A turmoil of despondency enthralling me eternally The gates, sealed Never knowing of parallel souls intertwined in rhapsodic beauty A splendour, discovered upon the wonder’s demise Repentantly unappreciated, last minutes, futile Distorting fog, abating in the moments, in the time of concluding despair Possible ecstasies, indiscoverable Oysters, forever remaining unopened Stars forget to shimmer, owing to unasked wishes You ceased to learn, to hear of admiration Captivated perpetually with regret Knowingly, the eyes never resurrect |
Beautiful piece with a serene vibe, loved reading this. Very nicely worded, in a unique poetic style. Emotion was definitely there just like the imagery, deep insightful words written here.
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thank you ma. .
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Great peice, man....I dont really read poetry but this was hot man......keep up...damn ure vocab is sick...i wish i had vocab like that....shudda gone to school LOL
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thanks alot. .
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