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~*Khatharsis*~ 06-16-05 10:05 PM

*UnOpened Eyes*
 
With no warning,
your eyes close
The void becomes never-ending.
A turmoil of despondency
enthralling me eternally
The gates,
sealed

Never knowing
of parallel souls
intertwined in rhapsodic beauty
A splendour,
discovered upon the wonder’s demise

Repentantly unappreciated,
last minutes, futile
Distorting fog,
abating in the moments,
in the time of concluding despair

Possible ecstasies,
indiscoverable
Oysters,
forever remaining unopened
Stars forget to shimmer,
owing to unasked wishes

You ceased to learn,
to hear of admiration
Captivated perpetually with regret
Knowingly, the eyes
never resurrect

DQ 06-23-05 11:32 AM

Beautiful piece with a serene vibe, loved reading this. Very nicely worded, in a unique poetic style. Emotion was definitely there just like the imagery, deep insightful words written here.

~*Khatharsis*~ 06-23-05 04:34 PM

thank you ma. .

PrahJect 06-26-05 06:38 AM

Great peice, man....I dont really read poetry but this was hot man......keep up...damn ure vocab is sick...i wish i had vocab like that....shudda gone to school LOL

~*Khatharsis*~ 06-26-05 09:06 AM

thanks alot. .


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