y'all gotta peep this!!!!!!!!!
 

Lifez lyke freedom cuz itz taken-n-given, N da afterlife iz a long time so i find it hard to put mah faith-in-religon/
Deaths a scary thang, but i still try to stay strong-son, with so many religonz out there i git worried, wut if i pick tha wrong-one?/
I gotta a real message to spread, so plz listen wen yu hear-it-flow, sum catz say yu reincarnate, but if humans all die out, then where doez ya spirit-go?/
But then again how do we know if we really have-soulz, what if death iz da 'end of everythin' jus like a 'black-hole'?/
i can explain dis shit, so i have no choice to let mah fear-come-out, ppl say yu can 'live thru memoriez' but who da fu.kk iz gonna be remebered a million 'years-from-now'?/
to all da religous headz out there, plz dont hate-wut-i-spit, but we dun really know if jesus, moses, or siddartha existed so how do yu expect me to put mah faith-in-a-myth?/
like a 'broken scanner' im a 'spill-tha-factz/fax', i mean, dont yall find it ironic im trippen on da 'mystery ov death' wen supposedly 'curiosity killed-the-cat'?/
i dunno wutz stoppin me, but sumthin jus wont let me end-dis-rhyme, i got most ov mah life ahead a me, but lyke a 'confused watch shopper' i jus dun know how to 'spend-mah-time'/
should i dedicate mah short time on dis earth tryin do wutz true-to-me? Or lyke 'Survivor' should i go all out in a quest to try n win immunity?/
as i move foward in life my 'view' gitz 'blurred' lyke 'girlz-gone-wild', i start to wonder, wut if die young, n never git a chance to unfurl-my-style?/
so as i lie on mah death bed, jus thinkin to mah self as mah flesh-decays, i wanna make sure dat at dat moment i aint got nuttin left-to-say/
so imma try n make my mark on dis world till da day-i-depart, cuz in life, unlike a computer, wen yu 'shut down' therez no 'way-to-restart'/

jus uppin this....needs to be seen

damn kid.....are u new to rv or u been here before......if you want to be in a crew check out RAW....ill holla at teph(leader) of it.......yo man good shit i was really feelin this....8/10 RTF LINK IN SIG ITS CALLED How i feel

nah been ere before...............just a load of haters made my life hell under my last alias
voting against me on battles i know i won.......................
so just thought id re register under a new name..........
shit is hot though huh

get these opinions in..................
leave a link and i'll rtv

it was nice homie, i really like your multis.....if you were thinking about recording it then you need to change the structure a little for the bars...somethin like this

Deaths a scary thang, but i still try to stay strong-son/
With so many religonz out there i git worried, wut if i pick tha wrong-one?/

instead of like.....

Deaths a scary thang, but i still try to stay strong-son, with so many religonz out there i git worried, wut if i pick tha wrong-one?/

please rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194203

yo thx for the advice

uppin this...........................................

COME ON PEEPS........u know this shit hot, so giv a lil feeback please.

yer dis is sum gd ####........... everytin woz pretty much ontop gd multi's but the lines need a lil tidyin up....... overall gd stuff . keep it up ~1~


p.s .......... drop a reply to dis plz....... return d favour... tnx ~1~

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195552 <-- clik link