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PrahJect 06-17-05 12:43 PM

MADDRAPPER vs Intermental
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 12:43 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 06-17-05 12:44 PM

Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 12:44 PM.

PrahJect 06-17-05 12:45 PM

When I spit, I cum hard, like I have verbal intercourse
I fucked your brain up and showed absoloutly no remorse
You spit multis and similes like they are verbal diarrhea
Cause your shit stank even before it hit my ear
Kid, you spit wack scripts you get *divided* like mathematics your verbal tactics are weak its only good fur the LACTOSE-INTORLENT
MADD you end up in willy wonaks factory cos u get broke down like cocaine and just remain as a GALACTOSE-OCCUPENT
Yo Madrapper is whack so when JRoy gave feed Madrapper had to diss him
This nigga needs to change his name to badrapper cos this another quick win


Merked nigga

System 06-17-05 12:55 PM

MADDRAPPER has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 12:55 PM.

MADDRAPPER 06-17-05 12:56 PM

Even with a style of speech you couldn’t smile and reach
People like preachers do just a creature to ugly to rap best I teach
Your brains and impeach your mainframe, your voice seem to squeak
And your scheme is weak which tells me you don’t have a team freak.
Even with the help of Abraham Lincoln you couldn’t have a plan
To rock a nation like the emancipation of Proclamation done do you understand?

PrahJect 06-17-05 01:14 PM

yo uppin for votes i will RTF people................

YouKay 06-17-05 01:52 PM

Voted For: Intermental

Intermental u took this battle easy.........
flow
vocab
punches
were all yours........
and the closer was a nice lil personal........although u could of came a bit harder....i read ya poen mic piece and was really feeling it.

badrapper...oop's.... i mean madrapper.......
......iz gotta be hounest.......u need a lot of work kid.......
..keep trying though.....u will get there...

PrahJect 06-17-05 02:24 PM

how thanks tekneek.....haha badrapper....now we jus gonna knw u whack

PrahJect 06-17-05 04:29 PM

uppin dis.....lets get this over cos i know this faggot got no chance

MiSk 06-17-05 04:43 PM

Voted For: Intermental

wack battle...

Madd.. ya had no personals, no punches and the flow was bad. Only thing ya had was mutli's... those wont get you a win... sorry mang

Intermental... ya had a decent verse... punches were decent, flow was good, what really ruined the verse was ya 3rd bar.... STRETCHED!!!... damn... didnt really have good personals... givin ya the win cause you actually had punches and somewhat of personals

PrahJect 06-17-05 05:21 PM

aiiite thank you uppid dis i wanna get this bitch closed

KaNg kOrRuPt 06-17-05 05:33 PM

Voted For: Intermental

okay here's how it went down maddrapper hd a bunch of rhyming words. alot of his verse didn't make sence. he didn't have multi's, or punchlines, and he had some weak personals.
Intermental merked this kidd not becaus his verse was great, it did have personals and punchlines, but because maddraper, oops i mean maddrappers verse really sucked.

Implicit 06-17-05 05:37 PM

This was feedback posted for MADDRAPPER
 
this is not a hating post..

you seriously are not good at battling..maybe i could see you doing topicals..but not battling..you have no punches at all..i think youre getting caught up with the multis and ur flow too much..u should really stop and sit down and think of creative punches like just starting out with simple similies..its not that hard..im not voting..

PrahJect 06-18-05 04:26 AM

uppin dis............................................... ..

PrahJect 06-18-05 08:44 AM

uppin dis.........................................


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