Tekneek vs Funn D. Mentals
 

Battle Rules:

10- unlimted Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
good luck fam.........

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Funn D. Mentals has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 04:33 PM.

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 04:47 PM.

Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section
Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection
So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool
'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u
tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent
The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance
And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win
He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in
So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head
Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread

not dab,,,,,,not bad at all.............
good luck.

Voted For: Funn D. Mentals

Aii This is What I thinks

TekNeek
Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section
Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection
...Nuttin Specail..
So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool
'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u
...Good Bar ...But Watch out for the self- Glorification...
tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent
The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance
...LOL I didnt get it at first LOL Nice Mayne
And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win
He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in
...no Punch jus a diss...<
So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head
Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread
....Ok......

Overall i think That You Should try to Work more on Hitting at your oppenent instead of boosting yourself up bcuz youll lose votes that way so ......work on that

Funn D. Mentals
Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!,
You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!..
....Ok....
Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!!
Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!!
...LOL That was Good qordplay...
Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!!
And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!!
/.....Nuttin specail..
I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool,
Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!!
....Good wordplay..
My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!!
Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements
LOL Good...

Aii Overall I Think That YUo take this battle bcuz you hade some very good wordplay but you dont have any direct punchez toward your oppenent then your gonna lose your next battle ...and work on fixing your structure bcuz the shit is sloppy man make it look like tekneeks and itll be easier to read ........And youll win yo next battle if you take this advice

RTF In Any battle link in my sig or You Will stay on my list of peeps who dont Return The Favour

Aii Man Ima Hold You To That ......................

up................................................ ........

Voted For: Tekneek

Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section
Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection
coo opener
So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool
'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u
self-glorification here
tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent
The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance
aight..
And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win
He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in
nice
So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head
Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread
okay


Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!,
nope
You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!..
Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!!
aight
Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!!
Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!!
2nd line was wack
And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!!
no
I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool,
Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!!
decent
My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!!
Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements..!!
coo closer

overall Tekneek took this one.. punches were just a little harder
flow was aight.. & the structure was good.. Funn.. work on ur flow
cuz ur shit was mad-long here.. & both elevate a little more on ur
punches.. & add some personas against ur opponents n’ shit

Voted For: Tekneek

Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!,
You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!..
^^decent
Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!!
^^didn't rhyme
Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!!
^^what the hell
Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!!
And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!
^^just stop
I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool,
Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!!
^^would have been good...if rhymed
My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!!
^^rhyme!!!!!!
Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements..!!
^^gon finish that bar?

U may have had sumtin there if ur shit rhymed.If ur shit dun rhyme...then it not a rap.And if it not a rap...then the other guy gotta suk real bad for u to win.

Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section
Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection
^^OK
So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool
'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u
^^whack....
tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent
The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance
^^^weak
And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win
He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in
^^nice
So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head
Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread
^^wak

You had a couple a nice punches in that shit.All you neeeded to do was bassicall make ur shit rhyme,which u did.So you won this shit easily.


Vote-Tekneek(vote in link below homie,please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194845

thx dog............................................... ...................................