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Funn D. Mentals 06-17-05 05:49 PM

Funn D. Mentals vs Eph
 
Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck..


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-17-05 at 06:19 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 06-17-05 06:00 PM

Funn D. Mentals has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 06:00 PM.

Funn D. Mentals 06-17-05 06:16 PM


Duke I'll "Hold Your Text" Until It Seems Your Bars Is Jacked!
You Worth My Time? Naw, You Should Get Charged For Rap!
You Against Me Homie Is Nothing But A Funny Slaughter..!!
And I'm Known To "Air Mail Your Text" Like Roamin Money Orders..!!
Accepting My Call, Eph, You?! Just Live Up & Check The Rules..!!
Cause I'm Gon Have You "Callin 911" Like Wycleff Tunes..!!

Blah.

System 06-17-05 06:18 PM

eph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 06:18 PM.

eph 06-17-05 06:43 PM

should tax you to InterCom, like you was all tarriff-ic.
cause ya class is still couped up, like a honda civic.
its all so fast, how we get rid of all you wacks with ya...
...leno rhymes. call it genocide, like rupal halls in Africa.
FDM you Hustled & i aint reffering to Cassidy's Rhapsody fade.
could say ya MO's to lose & beat ya...but that hast to be played.

eph 06-19-05 03:23 PM

ite...can some one vote... ( unsrtuctured ) .

K-Trini 06-19-05 04:58 PM

Voted For: Funn D. Mentals

should tax you to InterCom, like you was all tarriff-ic.
cause ya class is still couped up, like a honda civic.
^^didn't seem to rhyme,whack punch
its all so fast, how we get rid of all you wacks with ya...
...leno rhymes. call it genocide, like rupal halls in Africa.
^^again....whack
FDM you Hustled & i aint reffering to Cassidy's Rhapsody fade.
could say ya MO's to lose & beat ya...but that hast to be played.
^^^wak....c'mon this is torment

Your verse sucked.On all cylinders.Flow,Punches,everything.I didn't even see any peronals in it.

Duke I'll "Hold Your Text" Until It Seems Your Bars Is Jacked!
You Worth My Time? Naw, You Should Get Charged For Rap!
^^mediocre
You Against Me Homie Is Nothing But A Funny Slaughter..!!
And I'm Known To "Air Mail Your Text" Like Roamin Money Orders..!!
^^ight
Accepting My Call, Eph, You?! Just Live Up & Check The Rules..!!
Cause I'm Gon Have You "Callin 911" Like Wycleff Tunes..!!
^^whack

Your verse wasn't as bad as Ephs.Your best line was the 2nd. one.Eph didn't seem to have any punches in his hit.....you had ONE.So you got my vote.

Vote-Funn.D.Mentals(vote in my battle or this vote is dq'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194497

J. Dubya 06-19-05 06:47 PM

Voted For: eph

Duke I'll "Hold Your Text" Until It Seems Your Bars Is Jacked!
You Worth My Time? Naw, You Should Get Charged For Rap!
Eh..
You Against Me Homie Is Nothing But A Funny Slaughter..!!
And I'm Known To "Air Mail Your Text" Like Roamin Money Orders..!!
weak punch.. could’ve made this shit more better
Accepting My Call, Eph, You?! Just Live Up & Check The Rules..!!
Cause I'm Gon Have You "Callin 911" Like Wycleff Tunes..!!
nah, this punch was just wack


should tax you to InterCom, like you was all tarriff-ic.
cause ya class is still couped up, like a honda civic.
okay.. could’ve been harder
its all so fast, how we get rid of all you wacks with ya...
...leno rhymes. call it genocide, like rupal halls in Africa.
decent
FDM you Hustled & i aint reffering to Cassidy's Rhapsody fade.
could say ya MO's to lose & beat ya...but that hast to be played.
hah, this one was coo

Overall

FDM – your punches could’ve been harder than eph’s in this battle,
Cuz ur whole verse was wack, the structure was aight.. the flow
Was aight.. but the punches need improvin’ in this battle

Eph – your punches were aight here, could’ve been harder too, seen
Better from you in your other battles, but you came harder in this
Battle though..


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