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Typical vs (jimmy pocketz)
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 06-21-05 at 04:06 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 07:01 PM.
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ayo
they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice" becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch |
(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 09:40 PM.
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Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical & Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez |
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Voted For: Typical
ay this was a nice battle Jimmy Pocketz - ive seen much better from you..ur opener was ok..not all the great but it was a cool personal..i think that was the only bar i liked..the mike tyson diss was weak..and ur closer wasnt that great.....6/10 Typical - good verse..ur opener kinda sucked but after that u did good..the parenthesis line was dope..i really liked that one..and the line about jimmy in his pocketz..very original and creative..good personal.....8/10 Typical wins |
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
Explantion Flow- Troop / And Also Id like to say that the structure was very neat to thanx Punchez-[b] Troop He came way harder In all Ways Possible he really Did Take punchez by a long shot he came back to back with them so that made his verse more consistent and creative [b]Personals- Troop . LOL This is funny bcuz he hade some personals and I dint even see them at first until i read through it again so he gets that Multies-[b] Typical Hade some small Maultie areas in his verse but no big biggy so he gets that area [b]Vocab- no big use of vocab in these bars ... Origianlity- Troop He stuck to Tryin New punchez and new wordplay so that made his verse way more original Thand Typicals RTF In any battle link in my sig |
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Your vote was from a kid who votes against me in all battlez
cuz hes garbage |
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