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K-Trini 06-19-05 12:10 PM

Daubs vs K-Trini
 
Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-19-05 at 12:40 PM

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System 06-19-05 12:32 PM

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 12:32 PM.

System 06-19-05 12:39 PM

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 12:39 PM.

Daubs 06-19-05 12:40 PM

K, Trini your an incomplete jigsaw,the way you missin peace..
And i still couldnt bring out the devil in you.......................
.................................................. .....If i called your IP!!
After my OM's cut off ya hands, how you manage to clap back..
And you wouldnt make money off your raps............................
.................................................. if they were a council tax!!
My raps are like tight knots, by you they wont become undone..
Battlin me again, its like restartin chess games .......................
.........................................You end up back to square one!!

Read if needed:
Bar one, his IP begins wit 666 > devil.
Bar two, i unno if only english people will get it but you should..
Bar three, yea you must get it.

Dont get the punches or wordplay, dont vote or pm me!!

Daubs 06-19-05 12:54 PM

drop mayne............................................. ..

K-Trini 06-19-05 12:56 PM

Be patient Manye..................................

Daubs 06-19-05 12:57 PM

Ite, after this we fuckin the beef off..its whatever to me....but i cant be fuked wit it.

w/e.

K-Trini 06-19-05 01:08 PM

Ight.....

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/
Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/

K-Trini 06-19-05 01:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by K-Trini
Ight.....

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/
Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/



Explainin since I was short on time and couldn't do it
1st. bar
arteries conatin pulses which contain rhythms

2nd. bar
tenant-someone who pays rent
row-a thing used for boats
row+dent+rowdent

3rd. bar
IM+internet chat.


And duabs.......I know we got beef......but I give ya a props

decent verse ya posted there homie.

Sick. 06-19-05 01:32 PM

Voted For: K-Trini

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/

liked the second like, beat/artery wordplay

Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/

liked the row-dent, wordplay, hott ish

MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/

IM-balance, good wordplay, not really a punch tho


over - all wordplay was tight, punches werent really that good, but i like the verse

Daubs, nice wordplay as well, but i wasnt feelin them quite as much as k trini, mad close battle tho, for real, but only one can win... my vote - K-TRINI

13th. 06-19-05 02:35 PM

Voted For: Daubs

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/
OK
Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/
NAH...
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/
ERM...NO
=6.5/10 NO REALLY GOOD PUNCHES IN THIS.....

VS

K, Trini your an incomplete jigsaw,the way you missin peace..
And i still couldnt bring out the devil in you.......................
.................................................. .....If i called your IP!!
LOL....
After my OM's cut off ya hands, how you manage to clap back..
And you wouldnt make money off your raps............................
.................................................. if they were a council tax!!
GOOD...
My raps are like tight knots, by you they wont become undone..
Battlin me again, its like restartin chess games .......................
.........................................You end up back to square one!!
NICE....
=8/10 A LOT OF NICE CONCEPTS AND NICE PUNCHES.....

V/DAUBS

E.C 06-19-05 02:40 PM

Voted For: Daubs

ight this was a close battle... u have elevated madly k-trini good job man... daubs you didn't come as hard as i was expecting.

k-trini:

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/
^^ umm was this a forced rhyme? i dont get the punch here really
Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/
^^ lol this was dope, nice concept and hard hitting
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/
^^ lol this was ok i spose good closure


u have elevated alot man well done on this.. you had soenm decent punches in there but there was one punch that i didnt really get but it aint nothing u had a strong verse, was a lil bit on the stretched side but it wasn't too bad... good job :thumbup:

daubs:

K, Trini your an incomplete jigsaw,the way you missin peace..
And i still couldnt bring out the devil in you.......................
.................................................. .....If i called your IP!!
^^ lol this made me laugh good personal and nice opener
After my OM's cut off ya hands, how you manage to clap back..
And you wouldnt make money off your raps............................
.................................................. if they were a council tax!!
^^ lol i get this nice punch couldav been worded better though
My raps are like tight knots, by you they wont become undone..
Battlin me again, its like restartin chess games .......................
.........................................You end up back to square one!!
^^ nice wordplay in this one but it was a lil bit of self gloryfication...


you had a nice solid verse in this battle, punches arn't as good as they usually are but they were consistant in this battle, personals were there umm flow and structure was ight... u bastered u changed the style agen... no wonder my punch bput bullet holes didnt hit you fool.. hahaha n e wayz nice verse...

ight i think imma give it to daubs... i think his punches made more sense, and he stayed consistant in this battle becuz there was a punch that i didn't understand in k-trinis verse

v/ daubs... no hate pz

rtf on my marv battle... link is in the sig pz

NaRc-UzI 06-19-05 02:40 PM

Voted For: K-Trini

This was an no contest in my opinion,i thought that trini had a better verse with sick word play and better piunches.
fav line
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/

*RETURN THE FAVOR AND VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH BLACK QUEEN*

K-Trini 06-19-05 02:46 PM

[QUOTE=E.C]Voted For: Daubs

ight this was a close battle... u have elevated madly k-trini good job man... daubs you didn't come as hard as i was expecting.

k-trini:

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/
^^ umm was this a forced rhyme? i dont get the punch here really
Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/
^^ lol this was dope, nice concept and hard hitting
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/
^^ lol this was ok i spose good closure


u have elevated alot man well done on this.. you had soenm decent punches in there but there was one punch that i didnt really get but it aint nothing u had a strong verse, was a lil bit on the stretched side but it wasn't too bad... good job :thumbup:



Wtf?man....I explained shit at the end........an artery conatins pulse which conatins rhythm.So fuckin stupuid.It's shit like this that pisses me off.

Kirk 06-19-05 03:02 PM

Voted For: Daubs

K-Trini-Your verse was alright... Nothing special... The punches weren't hitting very hard... only one that stoof out was the last line... but thats its... You weren't very consistent with your punches and your lines were stretched like mad... Although the last line was good it didn't make all that much sense.... But anyway... alright verse... nothing too creative.. mostly punches i've seen before...

Daubsy- I enjoy reading a verse from Daubs cause they're very creative with his punches... IP line was funny and humor is great to have in a battle... I didn't really get the second bar but i get the jist of it... and your last lines were very creative too... You basically won this because you had much better consistency, harder hitting punches, and more creativity.... So overall you got this homie...


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