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Debut
It's always them broke niggas that wanna smoke witcha
them ex cain slangers....turn coke sniffas me, i roll a swisher the size of boa constrictors in the club holdin my liquor, posin for pictures foes they won't approach, they know my flow is elixir in any zip code you know we flip O's quicker rip shows, get hoes, my chips grow bigger but for the team, my Family Matters like them Winslow niggas but i won't even trip...can't stand a shit talkin... cripwalkin nigga....when he ain't even a crip yeah he spit but i ain't believin anything leavin his lips he a snake and i don't need to get bit to see that shit but if its really that real and you wnat a piece of this meet me at the pizza pit, one on one well see who quit infinite i ain't ever lost my focus......and please don't get to close to me dawg im clausterphobic this is the realest shit, you would think that Pac wrote it but these lines ain't mine, i shine divine cause God spoke it! |
...........THIS FLOWED NICELY.. THE LAST LINE WOZ WHT RELLI CAPTIVATED ME IT STOOD OUT MOST FOR ME OVERALL YEH THIS IS REAL NICE.. IS A SHAME IS REAL SHORT... CUD B SLIGHTLY LONGA
WUS GUD....... LIKE IT ... IT FLOWED NICELY AN IT WAS ALSO VERY CREATIV THE CONCEPT WAS GOOD AN CHOICE/USE OF WORDS WAS ALSO GUD AS IT PORTRAYED EMOTIONS NICELY.. HOWEVER IT WUD B NICE IF THIS WER LONGER.. OVERALL RELLI GUD........ KEEP DROPPIN FIRE ~1~ Quote:
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Wus Gud....... Like It ... It Flowed Nicely An It Was Also Very Creativ The Concept Was Good An Choice/use Of Words Was Also Gud As It Portrayed Emotions Nicely.. However It Wud B Nice If This Wer Longer.. Overall Relli Gud........ Keep Droppin Fire ~1~ <------ Dis Got Pasted In Accidently Frm Anotha Response I Written........ Inna Rush
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wrd good drop nice flow vocab and structure return tha favour on my new open mic
overall 7/10 keep it up dogg |
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