sabotage vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit

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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 06:43 PM.

If needed:
bar 1 = must get it...
bar 2 = hit link & independant - two crews, get it?
bar 3 = laugh like a drain = laugh loudly incase you didnt know.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 06:46 PM.

alright here it is


Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name*
His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame
Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more**
Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard
Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes***
He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies

*The last 2 letter of his name are B.S
**He claims to rep UK til death
***Mercedes symbol is a peace sign

nice, goodluck man..................................

damn we got a lot of votes.........................

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rv voters are wack!!!!!!! .

This was feedback posted for sabotage
 

Good drops from y'all.....Sab should take this for his creativity, decent battle from both


Good luck...uppin this for y'all two..

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs

You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews..
You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!!
The first line had nothing to do with the punch. Other then that, the personal was decent, the link wasn't needed and made the punch look wack, but the whole concept was pretty good.. 6/10
Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys..
And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!!
I thought this was pretty good. Another pretty good personal and the concept was pretty good as well.. 7/10
Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame..
Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter....................
...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!!
Lmao. The concept was pretty dope, and so was the execution. What you do need to work on is start setting up your punch by using the first line. The first line should be revelant to the punch in some way.. 8/10

Overall - 21/30

Sabotage

Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name
His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame
You too should at least start mentioning the concept in the first line. The first line should be revelant to the punch. However, I don't know. I have never heard anybody say that somebody's career is "fish crap" which is why, to me.. this seems like it was kind of forced, so you can use bastard to execute it, however it was pretty creative.. 6/10
Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more
Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard
Once again, you should start getting into the concept with the first line. But, using the keyboard to say you're above somebody is mad played.. 4/10
Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes
He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies
The first line was just a random statement.. and the second line's concept was getting to be played. The whole concept just doesn't hit hard.. 4/10

Overall - 14/30

Vote - Daubs

Hit up the link in my sig please.

This was feedback posted for sabotage
 

74 views and only 9 posts? come on yo vote on this

Damn, wish i had your alias before the battle.........

lol

Voted For: sabotage

sabotge took this battle easily his punchlines were more hard hitting then daubs his flow was better the structre was a lil off but it worked metas were pretty good...

best line-Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more**
Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard

thats some crazy shit 8/10

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This was feedback posted for sabotage
 

k ima vote but tight battle

Lol, Your A Joke...........................................