|
Smoove vs GKillaz05
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :shoot: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-21-05 at 10:09 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win -strobe |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-05 10:10 PM.
|
Your so whack, you might as well check-in and not spit...
I'll set your toilet on fire, just so you got hot shit... Your winnin' streak ima stop it, Kid get ready to lose... fuck kinda name is Smoove?.. musta been drinkin' booze... All your lyrics hear is boo's.. like there were ghosts... Wanted 2 prewrite his verse so he ignored all my posts... Your raps are burnt like toast, no one whould bite it... Wouldnt be surprised if you got your mother to write it... Gettin' all excited like a dog, about to piss yourself... Rhymes are retarded... when you spit you diss yourself... |
Smoove has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:45 AM.
|
Aight..
. . . . . . You’re the worst GK.. but face it.. your text is dormant & when GK hits the pad.. he uses extra absorbent Stay pounding you w/ these punches.. & I’ll crack the mold But your verse has more dots n’ dashes.. ..than Morse codes In text your weak.. plus.. your punches amount to shit GK soils his pants.. he added water & created a rain forest You kind of remind me of Jay-Z – out there wrecking the sales Also.. minus the flow, album hype, plus everything else Your not a very good employee.. so I’m about to give you the boot & your sitting at your computer.. surfing the net.. wearing a wet-suit |
Uppin..............................
|
Voted For: GKillaz05
You’re the worst GK.. but face it.. your text is dormant & when GK hits the pad.. he uses extra absorbent ^^lil played...but still decent Stay pounding you w/ these punches.. & I’ll crack the mold But your verse has more dots n’ dashes.. ..than Morse codes ^^decent again like bar before In text your weak.. plus.. your punches amount to shit GK soils his pants.. he added water & created a rain forest ^^Rain forest in his pants...dun see a diss You kind of remind me of Jay-Z – out there wrecking the sales Also.. minus the flow, album hype, plus everything else ^^Still,comparisoon to a legend is a no-no Your not a very good employee.. so I’m about to give you the boot & your sitting at your computer.. surfing the net.. wearing a wet-suit ^^^horrible Your best line in this whole thing was in the 1st. bar.When battlin...dun compare someone on the net to someone in the big leagues.Flow/structure was OK.Punches need improvement. Your so whack, you might as well check-in and not spit... I'll set your toilet on fire, just so you got hot shit... ^^uncreative and weak....... Your winnin' streak ima stop it, Kid get ready to lose... fuck kinda name is Smoove?.. musta been drinkin' booze... ^^^Okay...but sumtin more complex would be better All your lyrics hear is boo's.. like there were ghosts... Wanted 2 prewrite his verse so he ignored all my posts... ^^ignoring ya post...how that relates to prewritten Your raps are burnt like toast, no one whould bite it... Wouldnt be surprised if you got your mother to write it... ^^1st line was good,but 2nd was lacking Gettin' all excited like a dog, about to piss yourself... Rhymes are retarded... when you spit you diss yourself... ^^^okay Ur punches lacked a lot....but still way better than Smoove.I didn't see any werdplay or metas by you.Very uncreative verse.But I hope you wasn't really tryin because this was weak.Still enough for the W. Vote-GK(vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851 |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Juan Pablo Aspe....................................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin.............................
|
UPPIN...................... will return the favour
|
well return tha favor in my battle......I voted for you.
|
If GKillaz dun return da favor tommorow....I'm gettin my vote dq'd.
|
Uppin..........................................
|
uppin...............................
|
Voted For: GKillaz05
GOOD: Flow - GKillaz Structure - Gkillaz Punchlines - tie vocab - tie Wordplay - Smoove Nameplay - Gkillaz BAD: forced Rhymes - nope Forced Multis - nope Non Sence - nope CREATIVITY Theme Battle - nah Creative Punches - Gkillaz creative multi's - no PERSONALS: Gkillaz got the only personal of the battle... so he gots my vote OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: tie Closing: GKillaz COMMENT: Smoove you lost the fllow with that wack structure man... keep up on that both try to keep up on multi's and personals.. almost a tied battle V/ Gkillaz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:36 AM. |