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View My Vission Part 1
deception lingers dont fall into there trap
pay attention to this revelation we gota re-act/ to these politcians cause they wont listen so its my mission decison to see a calmer condition/ of this world wich is in a position of division we all sepreate we cant subside or divide/ we need to come together, Amercia unite bring back the respect to the stars and stripes/ rebel against the fuckin president right now fight now dont be hesitant/ cause at any moment there could be a draft then ya could be there with an AK in iraq/ diein for a pointless for his greed bush face the heat girt ya teeth/ be a man and apolige to the people cause ya whole campigan was dectiful/ ya full of lies you must die your resbonsible it at all posible stop the war no more/ bull shit reason its treason so can ya think what’ll happen when the draft papers is inked/ |
uppin for my dawg...
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uppin thanks for the feed back man keep it comeing..........
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yeah this was cool only because there was so much truth in it.......
...although some of ur lines were uneven in places i sitll liked it.......i would give it a 7 RTF in my sig |
thanks for the feec back man.....ill RTF tomorow im tired and i dont wanna give u some basic feed back...
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its cool dont trip.................
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Nice shyt i feel ya homie!Keep it up!)Overall 7/10(
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thanks for the feedback...uppin...................
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concepts played! Everybody has approached this concept at the same angle
i.e An angry citizen tryna start a revolution,pssh..try being more creative On the other hand, ya flow was decent, had few nice mutli's and lyrics. 5/10..played concept..i seen that bout 100+ times...sorry |
bitch fuck u...u fuckin newb battle me u punk...im gonna get at J.terror u fuckin with a vet u god damn newb bye bitch bye
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Tuttankamon.........
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whar the fuck does that mean...
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uppin..........................................
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uppin.............................................
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